Talk:Palm Theatre, San Luis Obispo

Notability
One more sentence in the section above the contents would help establish notability. Maybe something about its survival and becoming such an enduring cultural institution in a small town.

Natural is not a good word for interest

California that was formally a small--formerly

in the communities they settled in.--echo

Not only did independent and foreign films not appeal--echo

resurgance --spelling

Recently, independent theaters across the nation have struggled over the past few years,--redundant

This is a nice entry rich in information of interest to local movie goers and the many loyal patrons of the Palm.

To get up to A level, it needs about 350 informative words and a little more cleanup. An original picture would help.

This site leads to an article in the LA times that could enrich this greatly

http://cinematreasures.org/theater/7781/

what about this? http://media.www.mustangdaily.net/media/storage/paper860/news/2007/02/12/Spotlight/The-Palm.SolarPowered.Cinema-2712181.shtml

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Rudolph2007 (talk) 00:32, 3 March 2008 (UTC)