Talk:Palomita Blanca (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:31, 7 August 2022 (UTC)

This will be reviewed by me over these two days --K. Peake 08:31, 7 August 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Should you really use & instead of and in the infobox?
 * Swap the release sentence with the writing/production one
 * "It is a bachata acoustic ballad track about" → "It is a bachata acoustic ballad about" per WP:SEAOFBLUE
 * "was met with positive reactions from" → "received positive reactions from" making this the first sentence of the second para instead
 * Remove "for the track" after accompanying music video
 * Move the award sentence to being the second sentence of the second para in the new order, followed by the commercial one and then music video
 * Pipe Latin Award to BMI Film & TV Awards

Background and composition

 * "Juan Luis Guerra released his seventh studio album," → "Guerra released his seventh studio album"
 * "his answer", Guerra states." → "his answer", Guerra stated." unless this is a book quote, then keep as it is
 * "new album in Miami. "I'm making" → "new album in Miami and he said: "I'm making"
 * "On February the following year, the singer gave" → "In February the following year, Guerra gave"
 * "and that would be released" → "revealing it would be released"
 * "Guerra's label, Karen Records, revealed" → "Guerra's label Karen Records, revealed"
 * "the album's productions" is the plural really suitable here?
 * "that it would still contain the aforementioned musical genres." → "it would still contain the genres he announced." or something similar, per this being a new para
 * Remove the word song after ballad because that is another way of saying song/track for a musical description

Promotion and reception

 * Remove accompanying before music video since the term for implies this
 * "called it a" → "called the song a" starting a new para at this point
 * "referred it as one of" → "referred to it as one of the"
 * "as one of the record's" I don't think this is the appropriate introduction for a quote focusing on a "piece"
 * "hits of the midnineties."" → "hits of the midnineties"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "It was acknowledged as an" → ""Palomita Blanca" was acknowledged as an"
 * Pipe BMI Latin Awards to BMI Film & TV Awards
 * Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
 * "it became his" → "it became Guerra's"
 * Remove semi-colon at the end of the sentence

Weekly charts

 * Wikilink Hot Latin Songs
 * Wikilink Tropical Airplay

Year-end charts

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; nice work here once again! --K. Peake 07:09, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review as always. In regards to Allmusic's charts, the charts were provided by Billboard themselves as a license before the cost was too much for AllMusic (Source). For whatever reason, Billboard doesn't have a database for JLG despite him being one of the biggest Latin music stars. BTW, I don't know if you this, but I clipped articles from Newspapers.com and articles from ProQuest are free to us Wikipedia users (just go here) to access them. Hope this helps! [[User:Magiciandude|Erick] (talk) 14:11, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I did some brief copy editing but nice work on this! --K. Peake 20:33, 8 August 2022 (UTC)