Talk:Papi Chulo's/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 15:47, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

Should be an easy one. Will review this article. I'm not gonna lie, GA nominations give me more faith in humanity.  Gerald WL  15:47, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:27, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

Description

 * Link California and Mexico?  Gerald WL  15:56, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:12, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * I will not assume it's a painting of a Corona and a lime.  Gerald WL  15:56, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * I've linked to Corona (beer). --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:13, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * I know. First time I've heard of that beer name. My surprise towards the name probably is what happens when your life is fully Smirnoff.  Gerald WL  16:41, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * "as "a popular late-night destination for hungry club and bar patrons" prior to the COVID-19 pandemic." Is Zukin referring to the resto's state before the pandemic? If so, I recommend making it ""...and bar patrons" that is, prior to the COVID-19 pandemic."  Gerald WL  15:56, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * I've changed the text, not exactly as suggested but enough to make this more clear. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:14, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

Menu

 * Whoa, whoa, whoa! Not so hot, man.  Gerald WL  15:56, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , So, this one's tough, because a lot of the entree options use similar ingredients and the sources describe them in various ways. I understand citation overkill, but in this case I think the four citations actually work well together to provide an adequate summary of the menu. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:15, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , mind excuse as I read the citations?  Gerald WL  16:24, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , Sure, feel free to review sources and determine if there's a citation to move so they are not all bundled at the end. I do think they are all helpful, though. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , So.... this is a doozy. But quantitatively and qualitatively, I'll say I change my mind: latter's better-- we don't need more citation templates .  Gerald WL  16:31, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * "margaritas on tap"-- sounds like "on tap" is a slang. Mind explaining or clarifying?  Gerald WL  15:56, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , Well, "on tap" redirects to Draught beer, but margaritas are not beer so I don't think the link applies. In this case, "on tap" just means patrons are poured margaritas from a big batch of pre-made drink, as opposed to a single-made speciality cocktail. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:17, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , perhaps why "on tap" redirects to Draught beer is cause of it being served in a cask. Did a Bing check, and apparently there are margas served in a cask. Maybe we can link on tap to cask ale?  Gerald WL  16:38, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , I don't think we should link to anything beer-related. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:57, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , so I did a check, Oxford said that, in terms of drinks, it means "ready to be poured from a tap." I do think there has to be a simpler wording, or clarification. There is a Wiktionary entry, but to call it a beer, I find is misleading.  Gerald WL  17:03, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Agreed, thanks. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:04, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

History

 * "He had started"-- which?  Gerald WL  16:05, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * What do you mean? --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:18, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , forget it, I read the another line and then weirdly jumped to a whole other paragraph. Read this edit summary for more info.  Gerald WL  16:20, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * OK, thanks. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:22, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * "for the Fall season"-- recommend decapitalizing "Fall."  Gerald WL  16:05, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:18, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Link plaza?  Gerald WL  16:05, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:19, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * I think we should link Portland Bureau of Transportation.  Gerald WL  16:05, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:19, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * "Someone burglarized the restaurant in October[10][15]"-- supported by two citations. Should it be reformatted to "Someone burglarized the restaurant[10] in October[15]"?
 * I think that's more distracting, and prefer the current text. There's nothing wrong with having 2 citations. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:21, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Link safe?  Gerald WL  16:05, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:21, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

Second location

 * "in the new Alberta Alley development"-- what is the "Alberta Alley development"?  Gerald WL  16:05, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , A new development along Alberta called Alberta Alley. There's no article to link to here, and I've already mentioned the location in northeast Portland, which I think is adequate. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:21, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * I changed the wording a bit to clarify. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:04, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Link courtyard?  Gerald WL  16:05, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:22, 15 December 2020 (UTC)

The logo image has been reduced. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 03:35, 16 December 2020 (UTC)