Talk:Parallel Kingdom

Did a whole bunch of cleanup on this article, aiming for a more neutral tone (it had obviously been written from the perspective of the game's developers), and fixing mistakes such as tense disagreement. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.66.131.175 (talk) 22:34, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

I've added more credible sources for the objections outlined in the flag for speedy deletion. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Elliehumphrey (talk • contribs) 14:40, 18 October 2011 (UTC)