Talk:ParkWhiz

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Per the suggestion, please see a description of each requested change in the appropriate form. All new content that is currently not included in the article is noted as "none - new addition" below.

(ChrisMDooley (talk) 20:27, 12 July 2018 (UTC))

Reply to edit request 12-JUL-2018
Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes for information on each request. Additional changes were made to the article.  spintendo   22:33, 12 July 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) The History section was re-labeled Origins.
 * 2) The sections discussing the company partnerships were consolidated under one heading, Partnerships and Acquisitions.
 * 3) Authors were added to their citations in the references.
 * 4) The section discussing the company's charitable actions was omitted for two reasons:
 * 5) One paragraph was insufficiently paraphrased from the source material. (See WP:CLOSEPARAPHRASE.)
 * 6) A company's charitable actions may be laudable, but those laudits ought to be mentioned elsewhere. (See WP:NOBLECAUSE.)
 * 7) The article contained WP:TOOMANYREFS. Excess citations were omitted. Excess Wikilinks were also omitted. (See WP:LINKCRISIS.)
 * 8) Promotional tone and emphasis on the company's offerings and products were tightened and/or omitted.

Detailed information for page edits
As I did before, I want to share a few updates on ParkWhiz with the hopes that a neutral moderator could please review and verify them, and make the appropriate updates.

ChrisMDooley (talk) 19:47, 19 March 2019 (UTC)

Reply 19-MAR-2019
Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request. Spintendo 02:41, 20 March 2019 (UTC)