Talk:Park Hall (Oswestry)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:38, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

I'll finish this soon JAG  UAR   20:38, 5 April 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

 * I think that the second paragraph of the lead could be expanded a little to summarise the article per WP:LEAD. Maybe mention a sentence or two on its international football hosts?
 * "In 2003, Oswestry Town and Total Network Solutions voted to merge" - the first mention of Total Network Solutions should have its initials in brackets (Total Network Solutions (TNS)) as "TNS" is mentioned later on in the section without any explenation
 * "During renovation, The pitch was replaced with an artificial" - no capitalisation
 * "an artificial Ligaturf pitch based on the same that was used by Red Bull Salzburg" - Red Bull Salzburg is a dab link
 * "Park Hall has also been used by England schoolboys football team as their home ground for a match in 2016 against the Republic of Ireland" - since it seems recent, can a month be added here?
 * "The New Saints were awarded a £445,000 grant from the Football Foundation" - link Football Foundation
 * The external link is dead

Sorry for the delay in reviewing this, I usually review GANs in the same day but real life has held me back. This is a compact and well written article, so the review was quite short. The references are in good order and I could find little prose issues. Once all of the above are clarified then this should be good to go! JAG UAR   17:14, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
 * I have made the changes you suggested.  The C of E God Save the Queen!  ( talk ) 21:58, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you, this looks good to go now.  JAG  UAR   11:15, 8 April 2016 (UTC)