Talk:Park Hang-ryul

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Yeji0210. Peer reviewers: Kilabs, LiangShuang97.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:07, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Feedback
} Greetings! Wow. This is a fantastic article. You've done a really great job with this. I had a few pieces of feedback for you:


 * The lists you've put together are fantastic but I think they might be on the wrong side of the policy WP:TRIVIA. Take a look and figure out what you think. I could go either way.
 * Your references are included in a strange way. You should use the tags. There are details here: Help:Referencing for beginners
 * I think at least a couple references in English would be really helpful! Can you find any?

Work on these things and, once you've done, move this over to the "(Article)" namespace. Good work and good luck! — m a k o ๛  01:42, 24 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Thank you! I have a question about your first point. What do you mean of the lists? Do you mean Early life, Artistic style, Artisitc Themes, Exihibitions,and Public collection? I got the format from different wikipedia pages from other artists. Also, I have changed the references. Could you check it and see if I did it correctly? Also, I somehow cannot assign myself to review people's articles. If it is possible, I would like to review seobin and seungyeon's articles.Thank you!


 * Greetings!
 * I was thinking in particular about the list of exhibitions which is really quite enormous. These looks comprehensive but I think this level of detail might simply be more than one would expect from a general reference work. Take a look at WP:TRIVIA and make whatever changes you think are appropriate.
 * The reference still had some issues because they should be used "in-line" meaning that you sort of use them throughout the text and then the Wikipedia software will include them at at the end automatically. You can look at the changes I made which basically just involve moving the references up from the bottom to the first place that used them.
 * This is in a good shape. Why don't you make one more quick pass and then move it over to the main namespace. It looks pretty good to me! — m a k o ๛  01:05, 26 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Hello! I have some questions about uploading a photo or photos. I have a permission in Korean from the artist that I could use any pictures that he uploaded on his website. I downloaded the pictures but am not quite sure how to put it in. Also, I remember from the class that we were supposed to email someone about the permission. Who do I send the email to? If it is in Korean, is it okay for me to send it without the translation? Thank you!

Peer Review
Hello,

I have been peer reviewing your article and I am really impressed! I could not really find any huge edits but I did end up adding a category to your page and will probably add more. The only thing I can really think your article could benefit from is to add an info box to your page. I tried to look for an article similar to yours with an info box but had a hard time finding one, but I figured since you are more well versed on the subject that you might find one easier.

Overall, this is great!

Kilabs (talk) 02:40, 30 October 2015 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hello, I peer reviewed your article and I really like it. You provided clear explanation about Hang-Ryul Park, appropriate formatting as well as detailed references. I added one more category which is "artist". I noticed you mentioned he held some international exhibitions, therefore, I think you can add some more information about these exhibitions. I really enjoy reading your article. LiangShuang97 (talk) 04:20, 31 October 2015 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi, nice work! I really enjoyed reading your article and getting to know the artist, Hang-Ryul Park. It is great now, but I think it would be better if there is a space that introduces some of his work specifically. I added an infobox to improve. It will be much better if you can find a picture of him and add it to the infobox..I couldn't find one so! anyways! nice work!! :) Lsy2624 (talk) 22:31, 31 October 2015 (UTC)