Talk:Park system

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Stahoetara. Peer reviewers: Ekcy.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 06:09, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Feedback for Improvement
The page now more descriptively discusses what this term is! This is especially true because the first paragraph is much more fleshed out now.

However, I was wondering if the term 'patch and corridor' can be defined more explicitly in the article. I know that the article discusses what this term is, but someone unfamiliar with the topic may be confused by this term. Additionally, can some text be moved to specific sub-sections? I know that a lot of the information currently present on the page describes historical examples, which may not be suitable to be placed in another section alone. If you do find more relevant information, perhaps more sections can be made to place that information into. Ekcy (talk) 17:54, 4 May 2017 (UTC)