Talk:Parks–Bielschowsky three-step test

Review Parks–Bielschowsky three-step test
I created Park's three-step test and subsequently found that an article existed for an alternative term Bielschowsky's head tilt test. I moved the former to Parks–Bielschowsky three-step test and redirected the latter to it after merging its contents into this newer article. I would request you to review it and put a note.  D ip ta ns hu Talk 07:47, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
 * What sort of note are you looking for?
 * Have simplified it a bite and more simplification is needed to make the article more accessible. For example we should write "paretic" in simple terms.
 * Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 12:15, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
 * I was looking for the opinion whether I have done the right thing in relation to the terms. I was also looking for opinion on scope of improvement. May be you could give a hand too.  D ip ta ns hu Talk 14:39, 2 February 2014 (UTC)