Talk:Parsons Mead School

Merged Parson Mead School (wrong spelling but good info in the page) with Parsons Mead School 83.152.207.78 09:00, 17 June 2007 (UTC)

Written like an essay
I flagged this article as being written like an essay, in lieu of sections like "Jessie Elliston was born in 1858 in Bridgnorth, Shropshire. The family moved to Lighton Buzzard in Bedfordshire, where she grew up.  Life became difficult after her mother died and her father remarried, it was obvious to her early on that she would have to make her own way in life.  Jessie became a governess and worked for many high-class families," and "Miss Eleanora Ellison made off in the night, unbeknown to Jessie, having taken all the capital, about £200, out of the bank, leaving Jessie penniless.  This could have ended the dream but luckely parents and friends came to the rescue with some financial support." The introduction of the article also needs work. Iotha 19:07, 6 August 2007 (UTC)