Talk:Partition (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:13, 30 January 2015 (UTC)

Appears to be a solid article. I'll have this to you within 48 hours ☯ Jag  uar  ☯ 18:13, 30 January 2015 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Initial comments

 * ""Partition" is a song recorded by American singer Beyoncé for her self-titled fifth studio album (2013)" - I'd write this as "Partition" is a song recorded by American singer Beyoncé for her self-titled fifth studio album released in 2013 - just a suggestion though
 * The lead summarizes the article well, so this passes
 * "The production was handled by Timberlake, Beyoncé, Dean, Boots" - why is 'Boots' under his pseudonym here whereas everybody else mentioned isn't?
 * "I got to the mic, I'm like, 'Oh, press Record'"? - should record be capitalized?
 * "Midway the following year, the writers of Spin magazine placed it at number four on the list of the 57 best songs so far" - this part is unreferenced, and also "midway the following year" sounds like guesswork, could it be pinned down to June/July 2014?
 * The first paragraph in the Synopsis section is unreferenced

On hold
Like the last one I reviewed, this is overall a well written and solid article. The concerns above are relatively minor, so I'll put this on hold for the standard seven days until everything is addressed. Thanks ☯ Jag  uar  ☯ 17:01, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Close - not listed
I'm sorry to do this, but I'll have to close this due to inactivity. It is such a nice article though, so if all of the above can be addressed please come to me again and I will probably 'quick-pass' it like I did to the inactive Rocket GAN. Thanks ☯ Jag  uar  ☯ 16:31, 7 February 2015 (UTC)