Talk:Partition (song)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 21:53, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

 * The single cover images requires an alt description, so please add one
 * Rest is good

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 * "set list" --> "setlist"

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 * Here it goes by just "Beyoncé", but in the infobox it states "Beyoncé Knowles", which one is it for consistency purposes?

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 * Please remove the link to "arrangements"

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 * "..murmuring sound expressive of pleasure.[20]" --> "...murmuring sounds expressive of pleasure.[20]"

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 * Out of character review for one sec: "Thanks, Beyoncé, but if we're verbing, I think you meant 'Bill Clinton'd all on my gown." WHAT? OMG LOL

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 * Please link "contemporary critics" to the respective article for "Music journalism"
 * Great work!

Recognition

 * "In July the following year, the writers of Spin magazine placed it at number four on the list of the 57 best songs so far. A writer of the publication noted something "intensely gratifying about all the raunchiness on the strip-tease, booty-dropping banger" and added that it "oozes stunty swag and immediately became a coy anthem for pop-loving women; a song to flash and strut and snap to, and not only because the beat does too".[39]" --> "In July the following year, the writers of Spin magazine placed it at number four on the list of the 57 best songs so far, with a writer of the publication noting something "intensely gratifying about all the raunchiness on the strip-tease, booty-dropping banger" and added that it "oozes stunty swag and immediately became a coy anthem for pop-loving women; a song to flash and strut and snap to, and not only because the beat does too".[39]"

Chart performance

 * Nada! Nunca! Nothing!

Music videos

 * "The video for "Partition" was uploaded to Beyoncé's official Vevo account on February 25, 2014[57] while the one for "Yoncé" was uploaded on November 24, 2014 to the same service to coincide with the release of Beyoncé: Platinum Edition.[58]" --> "The video for "Partition" was uploaded to Beyoncé's official Vevo account on February 25, 2014[57] while the one for "Yoncé" was uploaded on November 24, 2014 to coincide with the release of Beyoncé: Platinum Edition.[58]"

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 * ""Parition" and "Yoncé" were both performed by Beyoncé at the 2014 MTV Video Music Awards on August 25 as part of a medley consisting of songs from her fifth studio album. The singer appeared wearing a bejeweled bodysuit and performed a dance choreography on a pole for the former song; "Yoncé" was performed later during her set.[108]" --> ""Parition" and "Yoncé" were both performed by Beyoncé at the 2014 MTV Video Music Awards on August 25 as part of a medley consisting of songs from her fifth studio album; Knowles appeared wearing a bejeweled bodysuit and performed a dance choreography on a pole for the former song; "Yoncé" was performed later during her set.[108]"

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 * Please insert a comma in between "Michelle "Jersey" Maniscalco" and "along with four female dancers.[117]"

Credits and personnel

 * Great! :)

Charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Also good

End of GA Review:
Very few comments, an all–in–all good article! Will definitely pass after a few changes are made! On hold! Contact me with any questions, thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 20:08, 22 June 2016 (UTC).
 * Thank you very much for the review. Everything is ✅. My love is love 22:57, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank ya, thank ya! Everything looks great! Love doing reviews for you! Contact me if you ever need a review, even when the GA Cup is over! :) Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 23:10, 22 June 2016 (UTC)