Talk:Pascua Florida

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 13 January 2020 and 4 May 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kernstnoel, Vanella876, Julianaferre2016. Peer reviewers: Gabrielle Rodriguez.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 06:10, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer-Review
Hi, this is for the student peer-review. I thought that your article did a great job being neutral and the sources you used were reliable. However, I felt that your article could use more in text citations under the header for History, and that you could link to other Wikipedia articles in text, and take the wikipedia articles out of your bibliography. In addition, it might be good to add a section for how the holiday is celebrated now, or if it is still celebrated at all. Other than those few notes, I thought your group did a really great job.G. Rodríguez 19:24, 16 March 2020 (UTC)  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gabrielle Rodriguez (talk • contribs)