Talk:Pastamania

Article is edited slightly
It has been edited to provide more objective and neutral information. The "marketing-speak", so to say, has been removed, as the source is from a website that is trying to sell the franchise. Such a point of view may somehow be considered as biased and incredible.

213.215.245.38 (talk) 19:23, 19 July 2013 (UTC)

Article reads like an advertisement
This article reads like an advertisement from the company. Articles should be written in third person, and provide objective view of the subject of the article. As it is, the article currently projects the subject, PastMania restaurant, as telling the reader about itself and how good it is.

Tigey (talk) 17:00, 19 April 2010 (UTC)