Talk:Patented track crane

Article feedback
Courtesy pinging major contributors After copy editing the article, I've compiled some feedback for future improvements: Best of luck with the article. Bobbychan193 (talk) 09:10, 13 October 2019 (UTC)
 * I was a bit confused on how the History section relates to article's subject. Are "underhung cranes" the same thing as patented track cranes?
 * What's the difference between patented track cranes and patented track rails? The Characteristics section seems to focus on the rails when the article is supposed to be about cranes
 * The Applications section lists no applications.
 * More citations are needed throughout the article.
 * Existing citations need to be cleaned up and improved.
 * Further reading seems like a laundry list; might be better to only pick a few noteworthy links and delete the rest.