Talk:Pathatrix

POV
This article sounds like a sales pitch. It should describe more and sell less. Jmeppley 19:13, 15 October 2007 (UTC)


 * I deleted my steps and tried to change the wording to make it sound not bias. Does this help any? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Smann2 (talk • contribs) 15:27, 17 October 2007 (UTC)

That's much better. The biggest difference was made by the removal of "novel" and "exclusive". Those words just sound like corporate bragging to me. Jmeppley 17:42, 17 October 2007 (UTC)