Talk:Patio 29/GA2

GA Reassessment
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Though this article has recently passed a GAN, I have concerns regarding the clarity of the prose. The article would benefit from a stiff copy-edit. I am conducting a full GAR to see if there are other issues which it would be useful to address at the same time.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  16:49, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

Tick box
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Comments on GA criteria

 * Pass
 * Has an appropriate reference section.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  08:13, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Article is stable.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  08:14, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Images are appropriately tagged and are relevant to article. There are three images, two of which are almost identical - one of the duplicates could be removed per advice at WP:IMAGE RELEVANCE. I suggest replacing the current lead image with the image of the plaque, and keeping the panorama.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  08:23, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Good inline citing to reliable sources.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  09:17, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Though it's not always clear what the prose is saying, I haven't detected any inappropriate interpretation. Statements appear to be based on the sources.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  09:20, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
 * No section is overlong or overly detailed.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  09:20, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Given the emotional and political sensitivity of the material, the article does well to maintain a neutral and factual tone.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  09:22, 1 May 2014 (UTC)


 * Query
 * Article complies with MoS - though the lead may need to be developed as the article is adjusted. We can return to the lead at the end.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  09:02, 1 May 2014 (UTC)


 * Fail
 * Broad coverage. Looking at the sources I list below, I feel that there are aspects to this topic that are not fully covered. Some brief background information regarding the 1973 coup would be helpful - perhaps as the first section, including some details on the return of democracy in 1991, and the 1978 amnesty. The history section could have a paragraph on the public exposure of the burials, then the formal investigations, then the results of those investigations. The description of the site, along with the Memorial for the Disappeared, could be next. And then the response to the burials, the Rettig Report and the documentaries mentioned in the current Cultural influence section.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  09:00, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Prose is not clear enough. A copy edit is taking place this weekend.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  09:01, 1 May 2014 (UTC)

General comments

 * Some reasonable English sources on this topic which may help with developing the article: Bioarchaeological and Forensic Perspectives on Violence, a clear and informative summary; Forensic Medicine: Clinical and Pathological Aspects, useful information regarding the Rettig Report (which could be mentioned and linked in the article), and the 1978 amnesty law, which I assume is what is being referenced in the phrase "the reframing of the responsible soldiers on trial as criminals", as under the law, anything that happened prior to 1978 was forgiven so no soldiers could legally be held responsible; and Memory and the Impact of Political Transformation in Public Space, useful information regarding how the Memorial for the Disappeared is used.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  08:50, 1 May 2014 (UTC)

On hold

 * This is a fascinating and delicate topic which fully deserves a place on Wikipedia. Information has been collected from decent sources, and has been presented in a dignified and neutral manner. The article meets all aspects of the GA criteria excepting clarity of prose, and broad coverage. More details are needed to fully explore and explain what happened. The lead is OK, but tagged with a question mark as that is likely to need adjusting as the article is developed. Given that sources are available, and that the article is basically sound, I don't see that after a bit of work that the article's GA listing should be in jeopardy. Putting on hold for the standard initial even days, though that can be extended as need arises. I am willing to help out with copy editing, etc.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  09:28, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
 * I believe your concerns have been addressed. I think many of the topics mentioned for want of broadness are off-topic, but I added them anyway (though not more about the Memorial). The Forensic Medicine book got the date of the coup wrong and used "cemetary", so I'm not sure how much I trust it on the other details. And I'm not sure I trust the March 2014 Bioarchaeology book's "'No men Nescio' Latin 8". Anyway, I appreciate your detailed commentary on the article, but I can't help but feel that this time would be better spent on other articles. czar ♔  23:17, 3 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Well done on being so prompt. I'll take a look. I'm not clear on your last sentence - do you feel this article is not worth my effort? I am a willing volunteer, so that's not a problem for me. If you feel it's not worth your effort, that's not a problem either - you are not obliged to do this. And if you'd rather work on something else, I'll be OK with finishing this off. Let me know, and I'll get on with it by myself. If I need any assistance, I can ask at one or other of the related WikiProjects.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  23:38, 3 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Sounds good. I'll be here. Let me know what you think czar ♔  00:00, 4 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Cool.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  07:04, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

Just wanted to reaffirm that I believe I've addressed all actionable concerns czar ♔  06:27, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I've not been paying attention to this one. I'll take a look today.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  07:59, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Ah yes, I remember. This needs a bit of work to keep the GA listing. I know you want to keep the listing, so I intend to work on it rather than simply delist, but it looks a bit fiddly so it's one that I thought last time, and again this time, that it's one to come back to when I have a bit of extended time to work on it.  SilkTork  <sup style="color:#347C2C;">✔Tea time  15:24, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
 * What are you looking for that hasn't been addressed? czar ♔  17:20, 14 May 2014 (UTC)

The broad coverage, clarity of prose, and the image duplication, as indicated above. I saw that you changed images, but you swapped one image for a similar image, the issue therefore remains the same, in a very short article we have two images of the same thing. As I say, these are issues that can be resolved with a little editing. I gave some suggestions above, though I am OK with doing it myself. I think I may have some time tomorrow.  SilkTork  <sup style="color:#347C2C;">✔Tea time  12:44, 19 May 2014 (UTC)
 * I'm happy to do it but I need more specific examples of what you have in mind czar ♔  16:22, 19 May 2014 (UTC)


 * Keep.  SilkTork  <sup style="color:#347C2C;">✔Tea time  12:59, 1 June 2014 (UTC)