Talk:Patricia Riggen

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Deathsmoothies. Peer reviewers: K223an.

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Peer Review
by K223an

Your article was very well done. You had lots of good information on your film makers one film La Misma Luna. Lead is well done, it gets straight to the point about the film makers accomplishments. I particularly liked the amount of information and understanding you had on the film makers style, for example how she wanted her cast and crew to actually experience the conditions of a salt mine. If possible add more information on her producing career and why she didn't care for it, also you have a few really short choppy sentences (which i fixed in the copy edit). The structure of the article is clear but could be a bit more balanced, such as more information in her personal life and producing career. Nice job overall! — Preceding unsigned comment added by K223an (talk • contribs) 22:36, 28 February 2016 (UTC)