Talk:Patrick Corbin/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TCN7JM (talk · contribs) 12:27, 16 August 2013 (UTC)

I realize this was just nominated yesterday, so I will probably wait until a little later on to review this. T C  N7 JM  12:27, 16 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Wow, that is quick. By all means wait a little while. It wasn't until I was walking home yesterday that I realized I neglected to even look up anything on his personal life. I just found this and I'm going to add this today. – Muboshgu (talk) 13:37, 16 August 2013 (UTC)

Alright, starting my review. Hm. Not much more to comment on here. Great effort. This will go on hold. T C  N7 JM  02:45, 18 August 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) The last sentence in the Early life section reads weirdly. It says that he liked basketball, but then immediately switches subjects to mention his favorite baseball team.
 * 2) No notable stats from his stint in Visalia?

Thanks. I'll get to it by tomorrow. – Muboshgu (talk) 17:20, 19 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Okay, both of those items are fixed. I added his ERA for Visalia (only 26 innings pitched there, so W-L record would be insignificant), and reworded the early life sports bits to separate the sports. – Muboshgu (talk) 15:02, 20 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Alright, looks great. I will pass the article now. Nice job! T  C  N7 JM  15:06, 20 August 2013 (UTC)