Talk:Patrick Harper (fiction)

Clarification requested
In the "Character" section, we currently say
 * These are also the reason that he has been risen from rifleman to sergeant and then sergeant-major.

Um, what does "these" refer to?

Also, the wording seems wrong. Should we use "has been raised" instead of "has been risen"?
 * These are also the reason that he had been raised from rifleman to sergeant and then sergeant-major.

Similarily, in a preceding sentence, we should probably have "gave" instead of "had given":
 * ... seven-barrelled Nock gun that Sharpe gave him as a present

Cheers, CWC (talk) 00:56, 31 August 2006 (UTC)