Talk:Patrick Henry Cronin/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) 00:25, 14 January 2018 (UTC)

Starting this GAR. Hope to be done within a week. Eddie891 Talk Work 00:25, 14 January 2018 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Per WP:LEDE, I'd expect a GA lede to be A) longer, and B)slightly better written. i.e. there should be a lifespan after the name. It should be at least two paragraphs, and go slightly more in depth.


 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions): y
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I'm Willing to approve the article pending fixing of the lede issue. Great job Eddie891 Talk Work 00:51, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
 * I expanded the lede. Let me know if that's sufficient. Thank you! MidwestCuttlefish (talk) 22:49, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions): y
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I'm Willing to approve the article pending fixing of the lede issue. Great job Eddie891 Talk Work 00:51, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
 * I expanded the lede. Let me know if that's sufficient. Thank you! MidwestCuttlefish (talk) 22:49, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm Willing to approve the article pending fixing of the lede issue. Great job Eddie891 Talk Work 00:51, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
 * I expanded the lede. Let me know if that's sufficient. Thank you! MidwestCuttlefish (talk) 22:49, 19 January 2018 (UTC)