Talk:Patrick Stirling (footballer)

Two Patrick Stirlings mentioned
Alpedio, its not clear what the note is referring to... ie its confusing! :)

To be clear, its important to link to his father as he was a significant figure anyway, but also because of the link between the Plant Works and Doncaster Rovers, and the influence his father would have had on Patricks status in Doncaster leading him to become Mayor. Cjwilky (talk) 14:49, 29 May 2013 (UTC)

Confusing
Essentially, It's the simple writing style that's confusing. Try to write it in a more formal way, instead of using sentence fragments and such. Alpedio (talk) 18:25, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Okay, I've done what I can. If thats still a problem, please give me an example of how to improve it using the content of the article :) Cjwilky (talk) 19:31, 3 June 2013 (UTC)

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