Talk:Patrick White (ice hockey)/GA1

GA Review
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Hello.  YellowMonkey  ( vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll )  07:42, 7 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Comprehensiveness
 * Some of the articles referenced have information on his childhood and beginnings. Why isn't this in the article?
 * Added a section about it.


 * Articles also discuss his playing style. Again
 * Included


 * Sourcing
 * Last parts of the UoM section are unsourced.
 * All taken care of.

 YellowMonkey  ( vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll )  07:42, 7 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Everything should be covered now. Kaiser matias (talk) 00:42, 15 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Well the sources and prose etc are fine, so I passed it  YellowMonkey  ( vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll )  01:35, 15 April 2010 (UTC)