Talk:Patsy Fagan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cavie78 (talk · contribs) 20:36, 25 May 2020 (UTC)

I'll take this one Cavie78 (talk) 20:36, 25 May 2020 (UTC)


 * This article looks in really good shape, so I've only got a few minor quibbles before promoting:


 * "developed a case of the yips" I know youm have a wikilink here, but might be better to say "psychological problem which affected his playing" (or something like that) in the lead?
 * ✅ BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "In the 1975 English Amateur Championship" Given that you've just talked about billiards, you should make it clear you're talking about snooker again.
 * ✅ BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Cites should generally come after a mark of punctuation.
 * ✅ - let me know if I've missed any. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "were the first to be held at the Crucible Theatre" Explain why this is significant
 * ✅ - is this suitable coverage? BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "He worked as a landscape gardener and a night-shift sorter for the Post Offic" -> "He subsequently worked as a landscape gardener and a night-shift sorter for the Post Offic"?
 * ✅ BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Shame there's no picture, but I've done a quick search and can't find a free one
 * Agreed. Especially as he appears on Pin-up (disambiguation). BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * What is the cite for career winnings in the infobox?
 * ✅ I've hidden this as no reliable source, and the same for highest break and number of centuries. I know you've raised the issue around sources with Lee Vilenski, and I'll be looking to contribute to the discussion. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC)


 * A very well sourced article on an interesting character. Placing on hold until my few concerns are dealt with Cavie78 (talk) 20:53, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking on the review and for your constructive comments. I hope I've addressed them but please let me know about anything else that is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:39, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks Happy to promote - congrats! Cavie78 (talk) 14:46, 26 May 2020 (UTC)