Talk:Patsy Pulitzer

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 * "She is buried at Locust Valley Cemetery, Nassau County, New York." Patsy and her second husband are buried there, but the only real source is FAG which is on the WP:RSP list. There are images of the gravestones on FAG, so it seems unlikely not to be true.
 * "In December/January 1957 she appeared on the front cover of Vogue France, photographed by Frances McLaughlin-Gill". The source for this is List of Vogue Paris cover models, but it cannot be confirmed elsewhere. The front cover in question can be seen in this ebay listing, and although it looks like her, I can find no solid sourcing. Edwardx (talk) 18:30, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Wording
This wording does not make sense to me: "a then world-record catch for a woman nine years earlier." Who is the woman from before? Did she break the record, surpassing a record from nine years prior? The sentence would read much, much clearer if it ended "a then world-record catch for a woman." Any thoughts? --Kbabej (talk) 21:36, 19 August 2022 (UTC)