Talk:Patty Loveless/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ChrisTofu11961 (talk · contribs) 15:20, 22 November 2022 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Good job with this article on improving it. I think if you make the changes below, it will pass no problem.
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * I edited grammar for you. I find it helpful when someone else does it for me so I did the same for you.
 * I edited grammar for you. I find it helpful when someone else does it for me so I did the same for you.


 * The infobox does not need any references except for the "genres" section. I was told this by 2 other editors who have reviewed my articles (I removed it for you).


 * The lead requires more about Loveless's legacy. Multiple journalists have named her among country's most respected artists. I think this could be added to the first or second sentence in the lead. There is a way to make this language not sound fan heavy. This could be referenced in a legacy section (see below).
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Not every section needs to be split by albums. This makes more sense for artists like Meghan Trainor who have less than ten albums. Loveless has a lot. I think you should synthesize these sections more. I modeled the first one for you (1986-87 section). Consider merging Honky Tonk Angel with Up Against My Heart (both could be combined). Albums on Epic between 1993 and 1996 could also be combined. Also consider re-titling these sections so that they align better with Loveless's career path (example: "Career re-launch at Epic" could replaced all the album titles as headings)
 * Not every section needs to be split by albums. This makes more sense for artists like Meghan Trainor who have less than ten albums. Loveless has a lot. I think you should synthesize these sections more. I modeled the first one for you (1986-87 section). Consider merging Honky Tonk Angel with Up Against My Heart (both could be combined). Albums on Epic between 1993 and 1996 could also be combined. Also consider re-titling these sections so that they align better with Loveless's career path (example: "Career re-launch at Epic" could replaced all the album titles as headings)
 * Not every section needs to be split by albums. This makes more sense for artists like Meghan Trainor who have less than ten albums. Loveless has a lot. I think you should synthesize these sections more. I modeled the first one for you (1986-87 section). Consider merging Honky Tonk Angel with Up Against My Heart (both could be combined). Albums on Epic between 1993 and 1996 could also be combined. Also consider re-titling these sections so that they align better with Loveless's career path (example: "Career re-launch at Epic" could replaced all the album titles as headings)


 * This artist requires a "legacy" section. Multiple artists have been influenced by Loveless's work. Many journalists and artists have cited her as one of the genre's most respected artists. This would be beneficial to include.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * There are more images of Patty Loveless on Wiki commons that need to be taken advantage of. I added one that is from the 1990s. But there is more. The one you had in the infobox is too big. I would put that somewhere else.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I think I got everything here. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 23:57, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
 * You're all set, congrats! ChrisTofu11961 (talk) 00:07, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I think I got everything here. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 23:57, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
 * You're all set, congrats! ChrisTofu11961 (talk) 00:07, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
 * You're all set, congrats! ChrisTofu11961 (talk) 00:07, 23 November 2022 (UTC)