Talk:Paul Bako/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Giants  27  ( Contribs  |  WP:CFL ) 03:30, 8 November 2009 (UTC)

1. Well written?:
 * Prose quality:
 * After playing 13 games with the Toledo Mud Hens in 1998, Bako was called up to the Detroit Tigers. I thought he was on the Reds? How'd he join the Tigers organization?
 * and he was part of Houston's roster for the 1997 National League Division Series, but did not play. After the season, the Tigers traded Bako to the Houston Astros in a seven-player deal that included Brad Ausmus. This is confusing since it says he was inactive for the Astros playoff team but was traded after the season. Please clarify this.
 * Bako returned to the majors with the Kansas City Royals. As a free agent, I'd assume.
 * Manual of Style compliance:

2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
 * References to sources:
 * Citations to reliable sources, where required:
 * No original research:

3. Broad in coverage?:
 * Major aspects:
 * Focused:

4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
 * Fair representation without bias:

5. Reasonably stable?
 * No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
 * Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Good work, I'll place the GA on hold to allow for the changes to be made.-- Giants 27  ( Contribs  |  WP:CFL ) 03:30, 8 November 2009 (UTC)
 * All three prose quality questions have now been addressed. KV5  ( Talk  •  Phils ) 12:20, 8 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I'm now passing the article. Very good work on an article about a player, where's sources were limited.-- Giants 27  ( Contribs  |  WP:CFL ) 13:34, 8 November 2009 (UTC)