Talk:Paul Beattie

Descriptions for links, non-duplication of links
, please take a look at this pair of edits to see how duplication of references can be eliminated and how links can be helpfully (I hope) described.

Stage by stage: first,

can be converted to:

and secondly,

Amazing article about Beattie. http://www.greatstuffaboutart.org/beattie

can be converted to

Amazing article about Beattie

Try to do something similar throughout the article. -- Hoary (talk) 01:27, 7 August 2020 (UTC)