Talk:Paul Conway (butcher)

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 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
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 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
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 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
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 * 1) Is it stable?
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 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
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 * 1) References are missing from some one sentence paragraphs
 * 2) Paragraphs should consist of more than one sentence. Please combine and integrate the one sentence paras or expand the article
 * 3) In general the article is very short - 2.5k of main prose. From the listed refs, there seems to be more scope for expansion
 * 4) Refs need to be formatted properly with full details of publisher, dates, author, see cite news and cite web.
 * 5) I do not think the PSYBT is a reliable source since Conway is one of their awardwinners and does promotions for them, so in effect he is in a partnership with them
 * 6) Lead is supposed to be a wrap-up of the main body. At the moment, the lead is basically more than the main body itslef.
 * 7) Refs need to be directly after teh punctuation, not before it.
 * 8) "in this highly competitive business" need sources
 * 9) "with overall Scottish third place" not correct English
 * 10) There are commas missing throughout the article

 Blnguyen  ( bananabucket ) 07:40, 21 November 2007 (UTC)

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How on Earth is this notable enough for an article?
It's an obvious vanity page, how has this been allowed to stay up? Why isn't there a page for every butcher, baker, candlestick enthusiast etc. in Scotland?