Talk:Paul Harpole/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Indy beetle (talk · contribs) 14:34, 21 May 2017 (UTC)

Comments
I must say I'm surprised to have found an article on a current mayor so comprehensive. Well, on with the review! Some comments: -Indy beetle (talk) 14:35, 21 May 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) His wife's full maiden name should be listed. Do you know when they were married? If so, that should be included.
 * 2) It says "[t]he next mayoral election is scheduled for May 6, 2017." This needs to be updated. Did Harpole run, and did he win? How was the campaign?
 * Thanks! I've found and included his wife's maiden name. I couldn't find when they were married, only that they had been married for at least 37 years on an unknown date, which I don't think is specific enough. I've also updated the page for the recent election. Harpole did not run, and someone else succeeded him. Ramaksoud2000 (Talk to me) 22:44, 21 May 2017 (UTC)

Alright, some more things (sorry I didn't notice the first time): -Indy beetle (talk) 00:34, 22 May 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) What is "Place 2"? A city district, a slot on the council? A simple and brief explanation in the body of the article might help. Also, it's so nuanced it doesn't need to be mentioned in the lead.
 * 2) At the end of the lead, just briefly mention that Harpole chose not to seek reelection in 2017.
 * Thanks! I've explained what Place 2 is, and I added that he didn't seek re-election in the first paragraph of the lead after mentioning the dates he served as mayor. Seemed more appropriate there. Ramaksoud2000 (Talk to me) 21:51, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Very good then. This article is a pass. Keep up the good work! -Indy beetle (talk) 23:27, 23 May 2017 (UTC)