Talk:Paul Jacobs and the Nuclear Gang

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 * I'm afraid that there are a few sentences which appear to be copied from the source and so the article needs to be rewritten in your own words to remove these issues. For example, the article says "Jacobs interviewed civilians and soldiers, survivors of nuclear experiments in the 50s and 60s, testing the effects of radiation", while the source says "He interviews civilians and soldiers, survivors of nuclear experiments in the 50s and 60s, testing the effects of radiation". There aren't very many overlaps, but they make up a good chunk of the article because it's so short. VernoWhitney (talk) 12:33, 4 November 2010 (UTC)

ok thanks Verno, I made some edits. Jbro0428 (talk) 18:10, 5 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for that! I made one more adjustment and removed the close paraphrase tag. Cheers! VernoWhitney (talk) 18:31, 5 November 2010 (UTC)