Talk:Paul K. Carlton

Reference improvements needed
This article currently has just one stated source, the official U.S. military bio for Paul K. Carlton. I see at least problems: 1.) the official U.S. military bios are slanted, in that they do not convey information that would reflect poorly on the military (compare the official bio of Frank Kelso, involved in the Tailhook scandal, vs. a better written wikipedia article on him using several other sources), and 2.) the article does not show which material is copied. Copied material should be in quotes (quotation marks or set in block quote formatting), to separate from wikipedia editor wording. See doncram (talk) 02:46, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
 * I've removed the "refimprove" and related tags as they are non-spacific to this article, rather you have added them with a generalization as argument. Proxy User (talk) 02:28, 10 December 2009 (UTC)

WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Tag & Assess 2008
Article reassessed and graded as start class. --dashiellx (talk) 20:01, 24 June 2008 (UTC)