Talk:Paul Leduc (film director)

Hello,

I had a few thoughts as to how to possibly improve this page. I notice that the only citations that are used are in film and documentary lists. To avoid being taken down I would be sure to put the citations into the biography section with the sentences and facts that came from those sources. I would also possibly divide up his biography into separate sections to make it easier to read and follow. Maybe separate the documentaries and his thoughts about them. Also avoid using adjectives to describe his documentaries, like 'powerful,' this may be seen as showing emotion and thus may not be suitable in the Wikipedia context. These are just some thoughts on improvement, let me know if you have questions.

--Ryan Ernecoff (talk) 17:54, 13 November 2015 (UTC)Ryan Ernecoff