Talk:Paul M. Treichel

Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

Espresso Addict 08:53, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Template:Infobox Scientist should be added
 * Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
 * Needs rewriting and reorganisation to bring into Wikipedia style
 * Some basic biographical information required, including precise date and place of birth, clarity on previous positions held
 * Article needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
 * Information on research should be expanded and references required
 * A selection of key papers would be interesting
 * References should be expanded and preferably converted to inline format
 * External link present which could be used to expand article