Talk:Paul Pogba/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 16:52, 21 November 2016 (UTC)

I should get around to this one tomorrow. JAG UAR   16:52, 21 November 2016 (UTC)

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Checking against the GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Usually citations are discouraged from the lead per WP:LEADCITE unless it's citing controversial information. However given the length of the article, I think this should be fine
 * " while Mathias plays for Dutch side Sparta Rotterdam and the Guinean national team" - why not 'club'?
 * "On 6 June 2015, Pogba started for Juventus in the 2015 UEFA Champions League Final as the club were defeated 3–1 by Barcelona at Berlin's Olympiastadion" - merge this with a paragraph
 * "Pogba finished the under-16 campaign with 17 appearances and one goal." - needs a citation
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * No original research found.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Ref 13, ref 48, ref 103 and ref 104 are all dead. If these can be archived or deleted if they're not valuable then this article should pass. I decided to do a shorter and more pointy review with this one as with the others, the prose is spotless. On hold  JAG  UAR   14:00, 23 November 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, issues addressed. Vaselineeeeeeee★★★ 14:36, 23 November 2016 (UTC) Actually, one sec, didn't see your comments above about adding a couple sources. Vaselineeeeeeee★★★ 14:59, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Now addressed. Didn't need the "a finished the under-16 campaign with 17 appearances and one goal." not necessary for under-16 Vaselineeeeeeee★★★ 15:03, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for that! With all of those issues out of the way this is ready to be promoted.  JAG  UAR   15:07, 23 November 2016 (UTC)