Talk:Paul Rabil

I am planning to make edits to this article over the next couple of weeks. First, I will reorganize the article in order to make the article easier to understand and have a more clear structure. I plan on breaking the article into sections based on various aspects of Paul's life. The first section will be titled "Early Life" with a subsection on Childhood, High School Career, and College Career. The next section will be titled "Lacrosse Career" which will have the subsections of the PLL, NLL, and MLL. Then there will be a section titled "Professional Career", which will discuss his various business and career ventures outside the game of Lacrosse. Finally, the last two sections will be surrounded around "Charitable Work" and "Personal Life". Once these edits have been edited and finalized, I will edit the lead section to give a clear, concise, and throughout overview of the article itself. Relating to this article in particular, I will focus on adding information to the professional career, personal life, and early life sections as those are the most underdeveloped parts of this article. See my annotated bibliography in the bibliography sandbox on the Wikipedia dashboard to get a better idea of the information I am going to include and how the article will be formatted. User:Dom Bahr/Paul_Rabil/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography (talk) 12:02, 5 April 2023 (UTC)

Place of birth
the infobox and the text are in conflict. was he born in elkton or gaithersburg? Toyokuni3 (talk) 16:04, 14 May 2012 (UTC)
 * issue resolved. thanks. Toyokuni3 (talk) 14:26, 11 June 2012 (UTC)

Unbelievable Lax Flow?
Is that really an objective fact to include in the summary? --108.48.132.98 (talk) 00:42, 28 May 2014 (UTC)


 * No, that looks like vandalism to me. If true, it would require a reliable source, which I doubt exists. I have reverted that edit. Huon (talk) 20:14, 28 May 2014 (UTC)

External links modified
Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just added archive links to 2 one external links on Paul Rabil. Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20080601190838/http://www.majorleaguelacrosse.com:80/news/pressreleases/index.html?article_id=966 to http://www.majorleaguelacrosse.com/news/pressreleases/index.html?article_id=966
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20120819005409/http://www.majorleaguelacrosse.com:80/news/6129/paul-rabil-sets-mll-singleseason-points-record to http://www.majorleaguelacrosse.com/news/6129/paul-rabil-sets-mll-singleseason-points-record/

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