Talk:Paul Rabone/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:54, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * "to Fighter Command and" link.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "the Blitz" link.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "intruder missions" what were they?
 * I've linked this. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "Christchurch in New Zealand' link ChCh.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "Territorial Force" link?
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "pilot officer" link that rank.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "he Battle of France commenced " link.
 * Done. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "missions.[5][4]" ref order.
 * Grrr, I'm usually a stickler for these. Fixed. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "the Midlands" link.
 * This is already linked, perhaps you missed the first mention. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Link for Drem?
 * This is already linked, ditto here. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Body needs to make mention that he was considered a flying ace, that's only mentioned in the lead.
 * Done, at the very end. Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

That's it for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:21, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, I have responded with these edits and comments above. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:32, 7 September 2021 (UTC)