Talk:Paul Spangler

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May, as in maybe they will be found here, but the links provided in the template should suffice, as to any regular Wikipedia the problems are obvious: "He achieved what most people dream of doing" is not encyclopedic. "practice what he preached. He felt that merely" is not encyclopedic. "...healthy 'til the day he died" is not encyclopedic. But, in general, this reads like an obit, not an encyclopedia entry. Aboutmovies (talk) 21:44, 12 April 2010 (UTC)