Talk:Paul Takes the Form of a Mortal Girl/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sawyer-mcdonell (talk · contribs) 18:25, 10 January 2024 (UTC)

I'll try to get through this today! Super interesting topic. sawyer * he/they *  talk  18:37, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, ! I'm glad we get to work together. I've removed the photo of Carmen Maria Machado. I also trimmed the reviews a bit, and started working to expand the lede. I can definitely do more of both of those, and expand the plot summary although I'll note that I try to adhere to Source your plot summaries. An outside perspective could be useful – is there anything specific that you think is missing from the plot summary, or just looking for more length/breadth? ezlev (user/tlk/ctrbs) 20:42, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
 * I think mainly just length & breadth; as someone who hasn't read the book, I think it'd be nice to have some more specifics about what Paul gets up to, which would then give some more context to the reviews (note; I'm on the same page about sourcing plot summaries haha). Thanks for your response! sawyer  * he/they *  talk  20:46, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Sawyer-mcdonell, I've made some additions. Excited to hear your thoughts! — ezlev (user/tlk/ctrbs) 22:15, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
 * The additions look great! The plot summary really rounds out the article, & I think the lead + review sections look really nice now. Awesome work!! (I also now want to read this book lol) sawyer  * he/they *  talk  22:34, 16 January 2024 (UTC)