Talk:Paytakaran/Archive 3

Summary
Summary of what has happened so far: User:Grandmaster has submitted some statements which he would like to add to the article. Those statements and their supporting references are presented on Talk:Paytakaran/Statements and sources.

Please read them over.  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  17:24, 19 February 2007 (UTC)

Mediation continues
According to Grandmaster, his draft is complete. Let's start with 1a on Talk:Paytakaran/Statements and sources. Please read it. Does anyone dispute the factual accuracy of statement 1a?  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  17:24, 19 February 2007 (UTC)

copied from participants' talk pages:


 * (To Fadix) The statements for inclusion to the article have been revised to accomodate your reservations. Have your objections been dealt with adequately in the latest version of the draft?  I look forward to your reply.   Th e Tr ans hu man ist   17:54, 19 February 2007 (UTC)

I have exchanged a block of 24 hours for personal attacks against not getting involved in disputes for 72 hours. Fad (ix) 18:03, 19 February 2007 (UTC)


 * Well, being that cooperation is the opposite of disputing, perhaps you could look over Grandmaster's statements of fact and let me know which ones you agree with.  Th e Tr ans hu man ist   18:53, 19 February 2007 (UTC)

He already know. 1)Paytakaran is the province mostly, this is the only fact. 2)Paytakaran has only been an Arenian province, Albania had Caspiane not Paytakaran. Just like Istanbul is a Turkish city not Greek, Constantinople was a Greek city. 3)There was no Paytakaran being a central city also known as Beylaqan. Presenting this as fact is to impose one position against the other. Beylaqan was a town, some transliterate it as Paytakaran, but this would go in a disambiguation page and could not be presented in parallel in the main article which is about the province. Anyway, you are corrupting me :) I am supposed to contribute in science related articles for those 72 hours, the was the promess I mad to the administrator who blocked me. Fad (ix) 19:07, 19 February 2007 (UTC)


 * I can ask the admin to allow you to contribute to this particular page, if you wish. Grandmaster 06:15, 20 February 2007 (UTC)


 * I believe I've identified the main problem in the Paytakaran discussion. The main cause of the dispute is not a disagreement on the part of the participants.  It is miscommunication.  The two sides have been having trouble getting their points across, and/or understanding what the other side means.  This has caused them to continue to argue over points that could easily be resolved if they each knew what the other side was trying to say.  It was hard to spot at first, because it's rather subtle...


 * I didn't understand your last answer, for instance. You didn't answer the specific question I asked but a more general one, and I didn't realize this until after I started to type a reply.  Your answer doesn't use the number scheme used on the statements and sources page, leaving me to guess or assume your intentions from an interpretation of your answer, and therefore I can't really be sure which statements you wouldn't mind having included in the article.


 * To avoid the need for interpretation, I need very specific answers. The statements aren't listed as 1) 2) 3) 4), but as 1a), 1b) 1c), etc.  Please look them over, and let me know precisely which ones you don't have a problem with (and which you agree can be placed in the article). That may help the mediation move forward smoothly and avoid further disputing.

 Th e Tr ans hu man ist  11:14, 20 February 2007 (UTC)

Reply to your general answer
I look forward to your reply to my query above. I'll also do my best to interpret your previous (general) answer. My replies are indented...

He already knows.


 * I'm not sure he does. I sure don't, and I read the entire discussion too.

1) Paytakaran is the province mostly, this is the only fact.


 * There is no 1). There are 1a) through 1f).  Are you saying you appove of all of those?

2) Paytakaran has only been an Arenian province, Albania had Caspiane not Paytakaran. Just like Istanbul is a Turkish city not Greek, Constantinople was a Greek city.


 * You said "Arenian". Did you mean "Armenian"?  So even though Constantinople and Istanbul is the same city (with the same location and many of the same buildings), it isn't the same city by virtue of who controls it, occupies it, and what it is named?


 * Therefore, you wish that care should be taken that the synonymns don't misrepresent the place at inappropriate times in history. That is, if I'm interpretting you correctly, the historic Paytakaran should not be referred to as "Beylaqan" (in parentheses immediately following "Paytakaran").


 * What if Grandmaster included the dates in which the alternate names applied? Would that fix it to your satisfaction?

3) There was no Paytakaran being a central city also known as Beylaqan. Presenting this as fact is to impose one position against the other. Beylaqan was a town, some transliterate it as Paytakaran, but this would go in a disambiguation page and could not be presented in parallel in the main article which is about the province.


 * Paraphrase: There was no city named Beylaqan in the province of Paytakaran.  To present Beylaqan as a synonym misleads the reader to believe it was called Beylaqan way back then.


 * Since the scale involved here is much smaller than Constantinople, and since Grandmaster's details are relevant to the geographical region and may help the reader put history into perspective in relation to the present, would it be okay with you if the existence of Beylaqan was explained in the body text of the article?

Anyway, you are corrupting me :) I am supposed to contribute in science related articles for those 72 hours, the was the promess I mad to the administrator who blocked me. Fad (ix) 19:07, 19 February 2007 (UTC)


 * I believe that the administrator wishes to see peaceful cooperation. I also believe that the administrator did not intend to disrupt cooperation on the Paytakaran article by disallowing one of the key participants from cooperating.  Be courteous, and try to accomodate to the best of your ability.  Help me find a common solution that both you and Grandmaster can live with.  Rather than merely objecting, you could go one step further and provide alternatives which you would be happy to support.  That will help the other side generate new ideas on how to solve this problem too.


 * I believe that Grandmaster wants to present the facts. He just doesn't see the same ramifications that you do.  Once they are presented to him in an understandable way (I had trouble understanding them too), he has shown himself to be accomodating.  So please, let's continue moving forward toward a common solution.   Th e Tr ans hu man ist   12:45, 20 February 2007 (UTC)

I do not agree with 1a), it is POV, presented as absolute truth. Kasp, Caspiane was once to the Medes, that Caspiane was Paytakaran is not certitude, check Tigran evidence page. The same goes with “Caucasian Albania.” Kasp or Caspiane should have its own article, much like Constantinople and Istanbul have their own article. That sentence would be fine for Caspiane, but not Paytakaran, which was more modern. Even Armenians had two different terms for the two entities, one was the Kasp, the other was Paytakaran.

1b), I disagree with, there are conflicting evidences there, more so when Paytakaran being an Armenian word, has never been used to name that town in the Armenian literature.

1c) is fine but too strong.

1d) is fine.

1e) is fine, but Grandmaster selectively quote Strabo, this wasn’t all he had said.

1f) is more about Caspiane, Paytakaran is a more modern entity.

1g) this is conflicting, and selectiveness, even Goldberg, who is very pro Azeri, write in her work, includes the Armenians being a significant portion of the population. Strabo, in the same section where he says being Armenian, say they all spoke the same language.

2a) is simply too bogus, for me to even comment on.

2b)We don’t know who the parcies are.

2c) Grandmaster is implying, most revolutions have been done by revolutionaries of the same nation the government represent. This doesn’t mean they were not Armenian. Also, Grandmaster has dumped much stuff with different periods. Again, I stress that Caspiane and Paytakaran are two different entities of different periods.

2d) Grandmaster is interpreting Hewsen, beside even Goldberg disagree.

3a) Again, Grandmaster is transformating the article, by reinterpreting what was Paytakaran. Being the province, every other thing that could be implied goes in a disambiguation page.

3b) Grandmaster is connecting Paytakaran with a Turkic tribe, a millennium after, what became of a Muslim town, has no relevancy with the province of Paytakaran. Fad (ix) 17:31, 20 February 2007 (UTC)

Notice
Those of you who are participating in this discussion, please look over Fadix's reply above. There are a few points he agrees can be added to the article. Do you concur? Right now I just want to find out where we are in agreement, before getting into further debate over the points where there is still disagreement.

Fadix has approved of 1c, 1d, and 1e. Do the rest of you agree that those are okay to add to the article?  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  17:11, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
 * 1c and 1d are fine. 1e is problematic because Strabo's quotes, when out of context make little sense. Because Strabo's information is often contradictory I wouldn't mind if we had a section devoted entirely to Strabo.--  Ευπάτωρ   Talk!! 17:31, 23 February 2007 (UTC)
 * But what's wrong with quoting Strabo? We can add any other quotes from this source you wish to add. I don't see how it is out of context, you may wish to provide the context as well. Grandmaster 08:25, 26 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Nothing necessarily. We're just determining where the common ground is.   Th e Tr ans hu man ist   21:52, 27 February 2007 (UTC)

Since those items have consensus, they can be added to the article, and the debates can skip those items. I should have time to make a new post to this mediation tomorrow morning.  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  21:52, 27 February 2007 (UTC)

Unprotection
If you guys agree not to edit war, I'll request that the page be unprotected. It'll make it easier to add the bits you guys agree on. I look forward to your replies.  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  11:42, 8 March 2007 (UTC)

Wow, it's unprotected, probably because of the arbitration you are all in. Does anyone object to me adding to the article the statements above which have consensus?  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  11:59, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Sounds good to me.--  Ευπάτωρ   Talk!! 15:38, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
 * No problem. Grandmaster 15:48, 8 March 2007 (UTC)

Speeding things up
Sorry for my unavailability - I've been trying to break a bottleneck in another project. To make up for my absense here, I'll present my recommendations for each point from the Talk:Paytakaran/Statements and sources page, in separate sections below.

1a - Synonyms for Paytakaran
Grandmaster suggested that the following item be added to the article to replace the first sentence:

1a) Paytakaran (Փայտակարան, Persian: to be added) was at various times a province of Medes, Caucasian Albania and the Kingdom of Armenia.

Fadix objected due to period confusion which it might cause. Istanbul was not the name of Constantinople during Byzantine times, for instance, so it is not a direct synonym for that city in the context of the period in which the city existed as Constantinople.

Generally, throughout this encyclopedia, there's no problem with providing the history before and after in an article on an entity, and/or links to articles on the entity during those other periods. The important thing is to make sure that the temporal context of the names of the entity is presented correctly.

Therefore, the various alternate names presented above that don't coincide with the period the article covers should be presented later in the article, with an explanation of when they applied, and not in the opening sentence.

Does anyone object to this suggested solution?

If not, then we need date ranges for the various names. Could someone supply those please?

Sincerely,  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  17:43, 20 March 2007 (UTC)

Uncertainty of a name
There was also some concern about the certainty of the alternate names. That uncertainty should be explained in the presentation of any disputed name.

Any objections?

 Th e Tr ans hu man ist  17:47, 20 March 2007 (UTC)


 * I think the lead should either list all the states the province was a part of, or mention none, saying that it was an ancient province in the South Caucasus that was part of different states at various times. Grandmaster 07:04, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Note that as mediator, I neither agree nor disagree, but I must point out that the standing consensus favors the present treatment on the page. Without further community support to change it or the scope of the article, it must remain the same.   Th e Tr ans hu man ist   21:11, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

1b Paytakaran (city)
The conflict over the city of Paytakaran is a little more complicated...

Fadix basically stated above that the town was never named Paytakaran while the Kingdom of Armenia existed.

Here is the map of the Kingdom of Armenia from the article of the same name:



In addition to this problem is the existance of more than one site. A city falls to ruin, and a new city is built miles away. Are they the same city?

So in order to sort these problems out, we need a timeline covering the sites at issue (not for the article, but for my sanity). Can anyone fill in the missing information below?

Timeline of the naming of cities or towns in the direct vicinity of Paytakaran city from prehistory to present
Feel free to add new items with more specific date ranges.


 * time - name


 * _____ BC to ____ BC (Caucasian Albania?) - _________
 * _____ to 190 BC (Medes?) - ___________
 * 190 BC to 428 AD (Kingdom of Armenia) - _________
 * 428 AD to _____ AD (Islamic rule?) - __________
 * _____ AD - the town "_____" was destroyed
 * _____AD to _____ AD - new town built, called _________

Please correct the information in the list above, and fill in the missing information, where possible.

Thank you.  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  18:35, 20 March 2007 (UTC)


 * The statement by Fadix is not accurate. The city existed when the province was called Caspiane, and the province was initially called Caspiane by Armenians as well, but at a certain point in the history the name of the capital supplanted the name of Caspiane, probably because the tribe of Caspies or Caspians “disappeared”, as Strabo reported. See the following text from the Russian World Encyclopedia, Volume II:


 *  Caspiane, which had its center in Paytakaran and the rulers of which considered themselves Arsacids, was also under the Armenian dominion. During the IVth century all these regions broke away from Armenia, and after the death of Tiridat III some Sanatruk declared himself a king, took control of Paytakaran and announced the conquest of the whole Armenia. The rulers of Paytakaran relied on the help of Sasanians and later assisted Shapur II during the wars with Armenia. In the 60s of the 4th century other Albanian lands also broke away from Armenia and also fell under the influence of Persians.


 * Here’s a quote from the Armenian primary source, Faustus of Byzantium:


 * About Kasps


 * Then sparapet Musheg took cruel revenge on the country of parcies and the city of Paytakaran, because the people of that country broke away from the Armenian king and betrayed him.


 * The footnote:


 * From this place we learn that the country of Kaspk (Caspiane of antique authors) was populated at that time by the tribe of Parsies or Parracies, mentioned by Starbo. Faustus of Byzantium. History. 5.14


 * As you can see, contemporary Armenian chronicles also referred to the region as Kaspk, i.e. Caspiane. Grandmaster 20:45, 20 March 2007 (UTC)

I need that timeline above filled in, because I'm having a real hard time visualizing the sequence of events here with respect to the town, or the two towns, etc. Can you help me out here?  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  08:22, 23 March 2007 (UTC)


 * We have no info on when the city was founded. We only know that the city of Paytakaran was the center of the province of Caspiane, and later the province of Paytakaran. We also know that in Islamic times the city was known as Beylegan. The Islamic history is more detailed, and plenty of info can be supplied on it. But pre-Islamic history is quite obscure. Grandmaster 09:59, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

1c
I added the following to the article, as per the consensus reached above:

1c) The province was located in the area of the lower courses of the rivers of Kura and Araks, adjacent to the Caspian sea.

However, I wasn't sure how the reference should be applied, so somebody needs to add that to the article:


 * reference: Moses of Chorene

 Th e Tr ans hu man ist  18:56, 20 March 2007 (UTC)

1d
This one was already in the article, but lacks a reference:

1d) Today, the area lies within the territory of modern day southeastern Azerbaijan and northeastern Iran.

 Th e Tr ans hu man ist  18:56, 20 March 2007 (UTC)


 * This is sort of an original research, however none of the parties objects to it. We know that the confluence of Aras and Kura is located in Azerbaijan, at the same time some parts of Caspiane/Paytakaran like Bagawan are now in Iran, see: BAGAWAN (Baguan or Ateshi Bagawan), a district of the land of Kaspiane (Arm. Kaspk, later Paytakaran)lying along the right bank of the Araxes river and corresponding to the northeastern part of Iranian Azerbaijan . Grandmaster 07:11, 21 March 2007 (UTC)

As long as nobody objects, then there is no problem.  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  08:18, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

1e
I also added this passage to the article, based on previous discussions:

1e) Caspiane was contested between the regional powers. According to Strabo: "To the country of the Albanians belongs also the territory called Caspiane, which was named after the Caspian tribe, as was also the sea; but the tribe has now disappeared".

The reference provided by Grandmaster was:
 * (reference) Strabo, 11.4

Please add the reference to the article in the proper manner.  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  18:56, 20 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Done. Grandmaster 07:00, 21 March 2007 (UTC)

2a - 2d
2a thru 2d are all about Caspiane, which predates Paytakaran. Fadix strongly opposed their inclusion because they are all beyond the scope of this article.

Mention of Caspiane is made in its own section of the article, so might I suggest that a new article on Caspiane be created, and a link to the new article be provided in the Caspiane section of the Paytakaran article. The link would go at the top of the Caspiane section and look like this:

Is this solution acceptable to everyone?

 Th e Tr ans hu man ist  19:09, 20 March 2007 (UTC)

(Conflicts over the contents of the new article can be worked out on the talk page of that article.) --TT


 * I do not think it is a good idea to duplicate the same article under a different name. We know that Caspiane had its capital in the city of Paytakaran, and we know that Caspiane became known as Paytakaran at a later time, probably because the name of the capital supplanted the name of the tribe that initially populated the area. See: BAGAWAN (Baguan or Ateshi Bagawan), a district of the land of Kaspiane (Arm. Kaspk, later Paytakaran) lying along the right bank of the Araxes river and corresponding to the northeastern part of Iranian Azerbaijan. Grandmaster 06:58, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Paytakaran was a province not a city. Fad (ix) 19:31, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * it was both and I have a ton of sources to attest to that. Grandmaster 16:44, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * You did nothing such, Paytakaran is the province, the sources you have provided states the city of. Paytakaran when used alone without any contradiction of sources refers to the province. Quebec is a province of Canada, the city of Quebec is the capital of the province of Quebec. The article Quebec on Wikipedia does not refer to the city, does not refer to both, it refers to the province of Quebec. Stop pushing this. Fad (ix) 16:55, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Paytakaran was both province and city, but this section is not about that. Grandmaster 17:32, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * No it is not, find a precedent on any other Wikipedia article. Paytakaran is the province. Fad (ix) 17:46, 22 March 2007 (UTC)


 * This is an Armenian source, Ovannes Draskhanakertsi, the footnote says:


 * Пайтакаран — город, центр одноименного наханга, близ современного Орен-Кала на Мильской равнине. В 338 г. Пайтакаран «стал временной столицей Албанского царства, здесь находилась резиденция мазкутских Аршакидов. (Армения по «Ашхарацуйц»-у, с. 88).


 * Paytakaran – city, the center of nahang (province) of the same name near the modern Oren-kala in the Mil plain. In 338 Paytakaran became a temporary capital of Albanian kingdom, the residence of Mazkut Arshakids was located there.
 * Grandmaster 18:07, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * No, this is not Beylaqan, what now constitute Beylaqan was NEVER writen in Armenian Paytakaran. You just don't want to listen, how many quotes do you want me to provide? Here ANOTHER ONE: One Baylaqan lay north of the Araxes and south of Barda'a (in the Mil steppe), and the other north of the Alazan (in Georgian Belokani) near Jar. A third Baylaqan is referred to in Persian Kurdistan on the way from Daynavar to Sisar. A History of Sharvan and Darbad in the 10th-11th centuries, V. Minorsky W. Heffer & Sons ltd. Cambridge (1958) p. 15 There are other transliterations (two others) which I will left down, I have provided another work, and also two other authors. Paytakaran was the province, it was a regional name. Stop it, how far you could try to link it to a Beylaqan to justify an Azeri term being used? Stop dissolving articles. It could be perged the day provinces article like Quebec could be merged with their cities. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Fadix (talk • contribs) 18:30, 22 March 2007 (UTC).
 * This section is not about the city of Paytakaran, read carefully. But you cannot write an article about the province without mentioning its capital city. We have a separate article on the city of Beylegan, but the city should be mentioned in this article as well. Grandmaster 21:38, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * No, there are 3 Beyleqan towns. In either way, Beyleqan isen't even an Azeri term, it is a Persian term, there is not a single Western encyclopedia in the world which write in Azeri any single historic cities. Stop it with that, the Azeri alphabet didn't even exist during that period and there was still no Turkic tribs living there. How far you can push this and try to link some current town in the Azerbaijani republic to throw a modern Azeri term, don't claim that you are doing it for the accuracy of the article. Fad (ix) 22:12, 22 March 2007 (UTC)

Grandmaster, it wouldn't be duplicated, since the new article on Caspiane would have a lot more material in it than the paragraph included in this article. A great many articles on Wikipedia provide summaries of topics that have their own articles. In such cases, the template main is used. For an example of how it is used, see Geometry, in which it is used twice. It is a perfectly acceptable method. We don't have to cram everything onto one page - that's what hypertext links are for.  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  08:16, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

3a - 3b
Fadix objected to these on similar grounds. That is, they occurred after the Kingdom of Armenia and its provinces no longer existed, and therefore fall outside the scope of the article.

Might I suggest that another section be created, such as "Post-history" with a brief statement of what the region was called afterwards? Then a link to another article can be provided (if and when one is created).

Is this okay with everyone?

 Th e Tr ans hu man ist  19:19, 20 March 2007 (UTC)


 * I have no problem on creating a section on that. Fad (ix) 22:39, 20 March 2007 (UTC)


 * The thing is that Paytakaran did not cease to exist immediately. Paytakaran had no Armenian population and was a land Armenia conquered from its neighbors. At certain point it left the Armenian orbit for good, but it is not clear whether it was immediately abolished as an administrative entity or not. It is hard to tell when exactly Paytakaran transformed to Beylegan, but according to professor Hewsen:


 *  Paytakaran, a completely alien land, left the Armenian orbit in 387, as did Korjaik, originally the kingdom of Gordyene, a foreign state that had belonged to Armenia for only about 250 years and whose territory was completely Kurdish in population even before the deportations of 1915.


 * The Armenian People From Ancient To Modern Times: The Dynastic Periods: From Antiquity to the Fourteenth Century. Robert. H. Hewsen. Historical Geography, p 16


 * I don't mind a new section, but I think it should be called something like "Later history" or similar. Grandmaster 07:26, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * That is not what Golberg work says, stop requesting positions to be presented as fact and stop interpreting sources. Fad (ix) 15:21, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Who's Golberg? And I'm not interpeting anything, in fact I suggest quoting Hewsen verbatim and let the reader judge. Grandmaster 19:30, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Oups, I meant Goldenberg, I already told you about it, but you would repeat it over again, here:
 * Following the partition of Armenia in AD 384, Artsakh, Utik and Paytakaran became part of the Sasanid Persian province of Arran (or Albania), a proportion of the people remained Armenian, and the local monarch remained a member of the Arsacid dynasty, a kinsman of the dynasty that had ruled Armenia since AD 53. Transcaucasian Boundaries, Suzanne Goldenberg, Richard Schofield, John F. R. Wright; UCL Press, 1996 p.91 Sabro also say the population spoke the same language. You are interpreting Hewsen. Fad (ix) 19:56, 21 March 2007 (UTC) p.91


 * I'm not. Hewsen says that Paytakaran was an alien land to Armenia, which it indeed was. And Suzanne Goldenberg is not an expert on the region's history and not even a historian. Check: She is not a reliable source, while Hewsen is an expert in the ancient history of Armenia. Grandmaster 08:10, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * You are in no position of questioning the sources, stop doing that it is called OR. As for Hewsen, yes you are interpreting the sources. This also is called OR. Fad (ix) 14:44, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * It is not an OR, I'm just checking the credentials of your source and I see that the author is not a historian, but a newspaper reporter. I refer only to specialist historians and primary sources. Grandmaster 16:46, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * OR, this is called OR, the work is notable, you are in no position to dismiss a work, your analysis of the author and the work is OR. Fad (ix) 16:56, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * It is not OR, OR does not apply to analysis of sources, in fact, the rules even encourage it. OR applies to what you do with Strabo, ascribing to him things that he never said. As for Goldenberg, it is a fact that she is not a historian, check for yourself and prove me wrong, if you can. Grandmaster 17:16, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Can you read what I wrote? I said that if the source is misinterpreted, then that should be fixed, not deleted. Fad (ix) 17:29, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * You mean you misinterpreted Goldenberg, and I should fix that? Sorry, I cannot follow you. Grandmaster 17:35, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Answering wrong one. As for the sources, no you are making up rules. The work is notable, and is sourced, you are also interpreting Hewsen. Stop it. Fad (ix) 17:49, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * How is it notable? Yes, it says that Paytakaran had a certain proportion of Armenian people, but it does not mean it was not an alien land for Armenia, as the expert on Armenian studies Hewsen says. California also has a certain proportion of Armenian people, but it is an alien land to Armenia, same as Tbilisi or Baku. But again, the author of your source is not a historian, so it cannot be given much weight. Grandmaster 18:03, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * You just contradicted yourself. Fad (ix) 18:05, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * How? Grandmaster 21:41, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * You are kidding me right? Fad (ix) 22:13, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Fadix, please do not use rhetoric. Simply point out the contradiction, please.  Thank you.   Th e Tr ans hu man ist   07:23, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Check the history of the discussions, now he claims that there actually was Armenians living there while before he claimed by providing Hewsen that it meant no Armenians. I told him he was interpreting Hewsen, he said no, he just in his last answer provided another interpretation, while I said that Hewsen was not clean with what he wrote. Exactly as Grandmaster for the second time changed his interpretation. Fad (ix) 14:45, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

Grandmaster, we keep running into the temporal issue of the article's subject. Therefore, I've disambiguated the article's name, so that it is about something very specific, with it's own time-frame implicitly built-in. If Paytakaran existed as a province of another country at another time, then a separate article can be written for that. Fadix has graciously supported the addition of a section called post-history. Please write up a (short) paragraph about Paytakaran after it was no longer the Armenian province.

There's no need to squabble over splitting up the information amongst several articles. Wikipedia is not a paper encyclopedia, and there are virtually no limits upon the number of pages it can have. Fadix is not saying you can't present information on each political entity, he is merely asking that you do not change the scope of the article by expanding it beyond the period the political entity covered by the article existed.

The way consensus works on Wikipedia is that if an article is edited, and someone objects to the edit, then consensus must be reached in order for the change to remain. In the case of a tie, the previous consensus stands. Since the sides in this debate are about equal in numbers, a new consensus on the scope of the article has not been reached. Therefore, the best solution is compromise, and write up a paragraph for the post-history section to see if Fadix and the others would approve it.

There is something about each of your styles of communication which is causing you two to be in continuous conflict. I think it because you are both arguing to force your position through, by "proving" your case. A much softer approach, which may help to move past the disagreement to a speedier resolution, is to ask questions for clarification and to make suggestions. "Might we do this...?", "Would you mind if I...?", "Here's a passage I would like to include, is it okay with you?", "What is it exactly that you object to, and what would it need to say for you to agree to let it be placed in the article?"

Fadix, instead of just pounding the gavel upon the table with a resounding "NO!", you might try to be a little more hands on, and write up some material to help move the situation forward. For example, instead of simply suggesting that a disambiguation page be created, why not actually create one? Once something is created and in place, it might not be seen as such a bad idea. It runs along the same lines as "a picture is worth a thosand words", or the Missouri saying "Show me."

 Th e Tr ans hu man ist  07:39, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
 * I don’t understand why the page was moved to its current title without discussion on talk. I don’t think we should have articles Paytakaran (Armenian province), Paytakaran (Albanian province), Caspiane (province of Medes), Caspiane (province of Caucasian Albania), Caspiane (province of Armenia), etc. It the same as if we had articles like Ganja (Iranian city), Yelizavetpol (Russian city), Kirovabad (Soviet city), Ganja (Azerbaijani city) etc. It is the same place, which changed hands and names, why do we have to split it into so many articles, while the info is so scarce? Grandmaster 09:44, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Because you will not be able to expand the article beyond its present scope (that this article is about a specific province of the Kingdom of Armenia), because it is defended by enough editors that you will not be able to overturn the standing concensus. Therefore, your only option for presenting the bulk of your material on Caspiane and post-Armenia Paytakaran, and my only hope of resolving this dispute, is for you to create new articles.  The move represents the scope of the article precisely as per the standing consensus.  Note that parentheses are not used on articles by default.  Parenthetical qualifiers are included in cases of disambiguation, and this article was clearly suffering from ambiguity issues.  It's time to move forward with development of the material.  Perhaps in the future, you can have the pages merged.  But the important thing is to make the material available in some form for the benefit of readers, and to do that these petty arguments must stop.

Grandmaster, you need to become more flexible and more resourceful. When confronted with a brick wall, as you have been on this article (in the form of Fadix and others), you need to be willing and able to move around the obstacle and find alternative solutions. I call this dancing. But instead of dancing, you seem to want to fight fight fight. And that is not good. It is disruptive to the community and to the encyclopedia's operations. The best way to resolve a dispute like this is to simply walk away. But I have a hard time doing that as well, so what I do in similar cases is try something different, try something else, try something new. If you can't go through, then try going over, under, or around.

Let me give you an example. I created a template called template:Philosophy topics, to be placed at the bottom of major philosophy articles, upon which I included various philosophy-related links. Not long after I created the template, another user started editing it too. He did not agree with my link selection, and I did not agree with his. We edit warred for weeks, even taking the battle to TfD, and wasted an incredible amount of our own and others' time. He showed no signs of ever giving up, as if his life depended on it. I realized that if I didn't want to spend a good portion of every day battling over the contents of that template, I had to either walk away, or find another way to get the material presented on Wikipedia. I chose the latter option. I created or expanded several pages to make sure that the links had other outlets, including the Glossary of philosophical isms, Lists of philosophy topics, and List of basic philosophy topics. That was almost a year and a half ago. And you know what happened? Those lists became so central to the philosophy subject on Wikipedia that they got included on the template! So my link selection is well-presented, all over Wikipedia, and on the template. Yet, other editors have continued to fight over the other links on the template ever since, partaking in endless debates on the talk page because the template is often protected due to the disputes. But I have been free.

Sometimes, you should just walk away. After awhile you may learn of other ways to accomplish your goal of presenting specific material for users to read.

Keep in mind that Fadix isn't blocking your ability to present the material on Wikipedia per se, he is defending the scope of this article. There is nothing to stop you from creating new articles. Fadix has compromised by agreeing to let the article have pre- and post-history sections. I recommend that you show some flexibility too. Fighting is a waste of time.

Remember what Ben Franklin said: ''Dost thou love life? Then waste not time, for time is the stuff that life is made of.''

 Th e Tr ans hu man ist  11:42, 23 March 2007 (UTC)


 * So far I was more flexible than the other party and made any compromise that was possible without affecting the quality of the article. For instance, I agreed to split the article about the city to help move ahead with dispute resoltion, however it is not a one way street. I do not think that splitting the article into many smaller ones just to please someone is a good solution. I never objected to inclusion of sourced and accurate info into the article, but in this case the other party to the dispute objects to inclusion of accurate and verifiable info, which is a violation of the rules. Maybe we can find a better solution by using different wording or getting more third party editors involved into the dispute? I think that Fadix violates WP:OWN here by not allowing me edit this article and include verifiable info. Grandmaster 12:06, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Grandmaster, compromising alone does not mean much, being reasonable does. I can request on the article about Earth to take a third of the article developping the Flat Eart theory, and then telling, OK, I'll leave it to one sixth. While it is being "fexible" it does not mean being reasonable. What non-sourcing are you talking about? Fad (ix) 14:50, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

Grandmaster, WP:OWN pertains to situations in which an editor defends his edits to an article in defiance of consensus, and to instances in which a user forces his edits to a page in defiance of consensus. That is, without community support. Fadix has not done that. Note, that in the case of a tie, the standing consensus prevails. The problem you have encountered is that you have been trying to make changes to the page in the face of roughly equal opposition. Only with enough support from other editors can an existing consensus be overturned.

Grandmaster, you are entirely correct about bringing in more editors. According to WP:CON:

"Once established, consensus is not immutable. It is reasonable, and sometimes necessary, for the community to change its mind. A small group of editors can reach a consensual decision about an article, but when the article gains wider attention, members of the larger community of interest may then disagree, thus changing the consensus."

See Requests for feedback.

I hope this helps.  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  22:06, 23 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Thanks. I would like to attract attention of third party editors to this article, opinion of other editors might be very helpful. Grandmaster 06:10, 24 March 2007 (UTC)

Current version
I will comment in more detail on your above proposals, but I would like to make a general statement on the current version of the article. It says that Paytakaran was a province of Armenia without mentioning Caucasian Albania and Medes. In my opinion, we should either list all the owners of the territory in the lead, or mention none of them specifically, i.e. Paytakaran was an ancient province in South Caucasus in the territory of modern day Azerbaijan Republic. Also, the following line: According to Strabo, both Caucasian Albania and Armenia had provinces with the name "Caspiane.” should be deleted, as Strabo says no such thing and this line is an original research. Grandmaster 19:48, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
 * No, Caspiane not Paytakaran. As Paytakaran refers to the Armenian province, Caspiane is another entity of a different period, that section could have clarification on Caucasian Albania, but Paytakaran as is refers to the Armenian province. Fad (ix) 22:38, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
 * I've dealt with this issue specifically in the section above, including a recommendation for solutions.   Th e Tr ans hu man ist   .  Please read each section above, and comment there.  Thank you.  23:01, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
 * It is evident I agree, this is basically my proposition. Fad (ix) 23:12, 20 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Do you think that misinterpretation of Strabo should remain in the article? Grandmaster 07:00, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Which one? Fad (ix) 15:21, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * This one: According to Strabo, both Caucasian Albania and Armenia had provinces with the name Caspiane. Strabo says no such thing, this line should be deleted. Grandmaster 19:31, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Give it up Grandmaster, it is sourced. You can not pick what you want from Strabo. Fad (ix) 19:57, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Show me then where Strabo says that there were 2 Caspianes. No personal interpretations, just the quote please. Grandmaster 07:51, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Oh PLEASE, He once say Casipane belonging to Armenia and then says belonging to the Albanians. Clarification does not support removal. Fad (ix) 14:46, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * But that does not mean there were two territories with the same name, he talks about the same land at different times. He does not say anywhere that there were 2 Caspianes. Original research should be removed from the article. We can quote Strabo verbatim, if needed, but no personal interpretations are allowed. Grandmaster 16:43, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Like I said, non clarification does not justify deleting a source. Fad (ix) 16:57, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Then provide a quote from Strabo that says there were 2 Caspianes, a quote, not your interpretation. Grandmaster 17:11, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Can you read what I wrote? I said that if the source is misinterpreted, then that should be fixed, not deleted. Fad (ix) 17:47, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, let's fix that then. Grandmaster 17:55, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * No, just quoting him, I don't want any of your interpretations going there. Fad (ix) 17:58, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Of course. He said that Artaxiad conquered Caspiane from Medes, we should include that as a quote. Grandmaster 18:05, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Not from the Albanians. The point Tigran was making. Fad (ix) 18:11, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * I never said that he took it from Albanians. Originally it was a province of Medes, then Armenia, then Albania, again Armenia, again Albania. Grandmaster 21:40, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * So you are admitting that it was to Armenia before Albania? Fad (ix) 22:14, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
 * I never denied it, moreover, I said that from the very beginning. Caspiane was originally the province of Medes, which was conquered by Armenia, and later lost to Albania. Grandmaster 10:19, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

Note, that while I'm not here to take sides on the facts or content of the article, as Mediator, one of my responsibilities is to clarify Wikipedia's policies...

Grandmaster, please keep in mind that even though Wikipedia does not allow original research or original thought to be included, original description is not only allowed, it is necessary for Wikipedia to exist. "Original description" is the reporting of a subject in one's own words. It is the basic method of contributing to Wikipedia, also known as "descriptive writing". If we didn't write the encyclopedia in our own words, Wikipedia would be one big copyright violation, because everything would be copied from somewhere. So not only are we allowed to report topics in our own words, we are required to do so in most cases. Note that all paraphrasing and non-verbatim use of language is a form of interpretation in the linguistic sense, but it is not necessarily scholastic interpretation. Fadix was merely reporting sources in a descriptive manner, which is completely acceptable, from a policy standpoint.

Though copyrights aren't an issue with mere quotes, we aren't forced to quote. That is left up to the discretion of the writer, and is more of a style issue. Different writers have different styles.

If you would like the quotes included, please write up a sentence or two including them, to see if the others in this discussion would approve of your proposed text. If they aren't too long, Fadix and the rest probably would not mind.

 Th e Tr ans hu man ist  06:55, 23 March 2007 (UTC)


 * I agree with that, and since the second Strabo quote is large, I provided a short description of it. It was like this:


 * 1f) Strabo also mentions Caspiane among the lands conquered by king Artaxias I from Medes.


 * This should be included in the article. I also think we should simply describe how this land changed hands between 3 regional powers, i.e. Medes, Armenia and Albania, without spliting the article into many smaller ones. Grandmaster 09:55, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

Fadix, Grandmaster does have a point. Since the lands of Albania and Armenia did overlap (though not at the same time), it is conceivable that the Caspiane of each rested in the same location, so the name may have carried over from one Caspiane to the other. So in this case there seems to be an ambiguity which Grandmaster would like to clear up, so that the reader does not make the wrong assumption about the locations of the "two Caspianes". Would you be willing to add a brief explanation to disambiguate that issue in the article? An alternative would be to provide sources which establish the location of each Caspiane.  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  07:12, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
 * I already told him that if the source is misrepresented it should be fixed, not deleted. We do not have clear delimitations as to where exactly is Caspiane, I thing Tigran sources provide that pretty much well with the contradictions between sources, while Oaytakaran had a clear delimitation. My point about the different Beylaqans, was about the town which Grandmaster wanted to equal with the province. Fad (ix) 14:53, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
 * There was only one Caspiane, Strabo does not say that there were 2 Caspianes anywhere. So this should be corrected. It is the same land that changed hands frequently. Grandmaster 09:47, 23 March 2007 (UTC)


 * This is the full context of Strabo’s second quote, he does not say that there were 2 Caspianes:


 * According to report, Armenia, though a small country in earlier times, was enlarged by Artaxias and Zariadris, who formerly were generals of Antiochus the Great, but later, after his defeat, reigned as kings (the former as king of Sophene, Acisene, Odomantis, and certain other countries, and the latter as king of the country round Artaxata), and jointly enlarged their kingdoms by cutting off for themselves parts of the surrounding nations,-- I mean by cutting off Caspiane and Phaunitis and Basoropeda from the country of the Medes ; and the country along the side of Mt. Paryadres and Chorsene and Gogarene, which last is on the far side of the Cyrus River, from that of the Iberians; and Carenitis and Xerxene, which border on Lesser Armenia or else are parts of it, from that of the Chalybians and the Mosynoeci; and Acilisene and the country round the Antitaurus from that of the Cataonians; and Taronitis from that of the Syrians; and therefore they all speak the same language, as we are told.


 * I highlighted the relevant parts. Grandmaster 10:18, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

Source required
Could someone please provide a quote from the source a reference to which is made to support the following statement:

According to Anania Shirakatsi's Ashkharatsuyts'' ("World Atlas," 7th c. AD), Paytakaran was the 11th among the 15 provinces of the Kingdom of Armenia. It consisted of 14 cantons (gavars): Hrakot, Perozh, Vardanakert, Yotnporakyan Bagink, Krekyan, Vovtibagha, Kaghanost, Buros, Pitchanhani, Atshi, Bagavan, Spandaran-perozh, Vormizd-perozh, and Alevan. It was bounded by the Capsian Sea to the east, Araxes river to the north and north-west, Atropatene to the south, and the Armenian province of Vaspurakan to the west''.

I would like to see what Shirakatsi actually states about this territory. I have already asked for this, but it's never been supplied. Grandmaster 07:16, 21 March 2007 (UTC)

I'm taking a 2 week wikibreak
While I'm gone, please try to resolve your differences in a collaborative cooperative manner. Try to move past arguing to passing sample text back and forth. Let the other know what you would be willing to accept rather than just what you won't. If you still have difficulties, please keep in mind...

...that my userpages will be attended to by some very competent editors who are taking over my responsibilities while I am gone, and so if you need further assistance, post a message to my talk page, and they will be happy to assist you in any way they can. I've posted an explanation of this mediation to them, so they know what is going on.

Sincerely,

 Th e Tr ans hu man ist  08:30, 23 March 2007 (UTC)


 * I would like to thank The Transhumanist for all the time and effort he spared on mediating the dispute, he was very helpful, and while I understand that people have other things to do in real life, I think we cannot stop dispute resolution at this point, as it has been going on for quite a long time now. I will take his advice and ask people who watch his talk page to help us resolve the dispute. Grandmaster 11:13, 23 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Good evening (GMT time) all; I'd be willing to mediate this case in place of TT. However, I do have my own style of Mediation which is rather more to-the-point; if this is acceptable, drop me a message at my talk page and I'll get straight on the case.


 * Kind regards, anthony [ cfc ] 22:28, 23 March 2007 (UTC)

Source required
Could someone please provide a quote from the source a reference to which is made to support the following statement:

According to Anania Shirakatsi's Ashkharatsuyts'' ("World Atlas," 7th c. AD), Paytakaran was the 11th among the 15 provinces of the Kingdom of Armenia. It consisted of 14 cantons (gavars): Hrakot, Perozh, Vardanakert, Yotnporakyan Bagink, Krekyan, Vovtibagha, Kaghanost, Buros, Pitchanhani, Atshi, Bagavan, Spandaran-perozh, Vormizd-perozh, and Alevan. It was bounded by the Capsian Sea to the east, Araxes river to the north and north-west, Atropatene to the south, and the Armenian province of Vaspurakan to the west''.

I would like to see what Shirakatsi actually states about this territory. I have already asked for this, but it's never been supplied. Grandmaster 07:16, 21 March 2007 (UTC)

Archive
Prior conversations have been archived to the third archive; if you wish to restore a conversation, simply copy the entire thread to this page.

This archiving has been undertaken in order to keep this page readable; I hope this is an acceptable action amongst the disputing editors.

Kind regards, anthony [ cfc ] 15:13, 24 March 2007 (UTC)

Mediatior
Good afternoon (GMT time) all; The Transhumanist and Grandmaster have gave their blessing on my taking over this case as mediator, pending the former's WikiBreak. Any editors that would like to object to my mediating this case, please immediately drop me a message; the same goes for my actions as a mediator.

Before mediation re-commences, I'd like to start by making a brief introduction of myself. My experience on Wikipedia is not as extensive as The Transhumanist, but I have mediated over fifteen successful cases for the Mediation Cabal/Mediation Committee, as well as several as a Member's Advocate. I operate a strict neutrality policy, which is viewable here; the general outlook I follow in Mediation cases is viewable here.

My duties as Mediator are often restricted to:
 * 1) Keeping the talk page tidy and archived;
 * 2) Determining consensus in "requested edits";
 * 3) Cautioning over civility on rare occasions this is necessary.

Questions concerning this should be directed to me immediately; in the meanwhile, I invite all editors to continue the discussion that was being undertaken during The Transhumanist's time here.

Kind regards, anthony [ cfc ] 15:13, 24 March 2007 (UTC)

Page move
The page has been moved without consensus on talk, so I moved it back until the consensus is reached. Grandmaster 04:40, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Do you really enjoy creating conflicts? discuss it instead of reverting it. Artaxiad 04:41, 28 March 2007 (UTC)


 * If you check the archives, this is what I do for quite some time now. But the page cannot be moved without a consensus. So we need to discuss any such edits prior to making them. I understand that this is what The Transhumanist proposed as a possible way of resolution of the dispute (i.e. split of the article into many smaller ones), but I think he should have discussed the move first. Grandmaster 05:51, 28 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Grandmaster's action was probably spurred on by the undesirable effect the rename had on ArbCom.   ::Was the moved because "Paytakaran" is/was used to refer to the same region by different independent states throughout the ages; could someone summarise what other topics other than the Armenian province would have a claim to the name "Paytakaran"; is/was it used in Azerbaijan at any time? John Vandenberg 05:55, 28 March 2007 (UTC)


 * We have a long edit conflict over this issue, which is currently being mediated at my request. Paytakaran was also a province of Medes and Caucasian Albania. And yes, my revert of the page move was in part caused by the current arbcom case, since a lot of the links point to the original name of the article. Grandmaster 06:07, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
 * This is my proposed version, each line is supported by references: Grandmaster 06:10, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Why did you move it to Caspiane without even discussing it? That's just outright wrong!--  Ευπάτωρ   Talk!! 00:09, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
 * I did not move it to Caspiane, I moved it back to its original title, as there was no consensus for the move. And stop inserting your interpretation of Strabo, he does not say anywhere that there were 2 Caspianes. Provide the exact quote instead. Grandmaster 05:00, 30 March 2007 (UTC)


 * This is the full context of Strabo’s second quote, he does not say that there were 2 Caspianes:


 * According to report, Armenia, though a small country in earlier times, was enlarged by Artaxias and Zariadris, who formerly were generals of Antiochus the Great, but later, after his defeat, reigned as kings (the former as king of Sophene, Acisene, Odomantis, and certain other countries, and the latter as king of the country round Artaxata), and jointly enlarged their kingdoms by cutting off for themselves parts of the surrounding nations,-- I mean by cutting off Caspiane and Phaunitis and Basoropeda from the country of the Medes ; and the country along the side of Mt. Paryadres and Chorsene and Gogarene, which last is on the far side of the Cyrus River, from that of the Iberians; and Carenitis and Xerxene, which border on Lesser Armenia or else are parts of it, from that of the Chalybians and the Mosynoeci; and Acilisene and the country round the Antitaurus from that of the Cataonians; and Taronitis from that of the Syrians; and therefore they all speak the same language, as we are told.


 * Eupator, so why do you include original research in the article? This quote could be summarized as follows: Strabo also mentions Caspiane among the lands conquered by king Artaxias I from Medes, because this is what he says, Artaxias conquered Caspiane from Medes. Any personal ideas and comments should be kept out of the article as per WP:NOR. Grandmaster 07:05, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Yeah, Artaxias retook an Armenian speaking land back from the Medes according to Strabo. They spoke the same language remember? Anyway, I will be on vacation in the sunny south until April 9. So barring TigrantheGreat's unexpected return do not make any changes to the article. I will be more actively involved when I return.--  Ευπάτωρ   Talk!! 13:02, 30 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Again interpretation. He did not "retake", he conquered the land from Medes. It was not Armenian speaking before that, Strabo says that they all speak the same language "therefore", i.e. because of that conquest. He does not say anywhere that there were 2 Caspianes, it is your original research, which I'm removing from the article. Grandmaster 17:56, 30 March 2007 (UTC)

(reduce indent) I'm going to step in here, as things are getting quite heated. In order for me to understand exactly what is wrong here (I don't expect to have to sift through screeds of debate on a topic that I have no prior knowledge on), I'd like involved editors to post a quick summary of their argument for or against the page move. In the meanwhile, I'd like to keep it at it's current title - this is not an endorsement of the current page at all, but simply to prevent any further move warring. Please do not move the page again - please treat it as fully protected from moves. Going back to the requests for argument outlines, here's an example:


 * Again, what are we trying to achieve? Strabo does not talk about 2 Caspianeas, but one. Similiarly there was one Paytakaran region and one Paytakaran city. I brought the text to its previous position.  Let's discuss before we run into another disagreement. --Ulvi I. 15:55, 8 April 2007 (UTC)

Arguments regarding page move

 * First page title: Paytakaran
 * Second page title: Paytakaran (Armenian province)

Anthony cfc

 * (This is an example - I am not taking any stance in the argument)

I am against the page move because:
 * The first title is correct because XYZ (links to sources, etc.., please - not condensed versions of above arguments unless they conform to this criteria)

anthony [ cfc ] 15:34, 4 April 2007 (UTC)

'Section blanked - please follow the template above; the idea is to not'' have screeds of discussion. Thank you.'''

Regards, Anthony cfc (talk) 19:22, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

Grandmaster
I oppose the page move because I see no point in creation of a separate article about every period it changed hands from one state to another. As is known, the region was part of Medes, Armenia and Caucasian Albania, so creating 3 articles about the same region at different times is not a good solution, considering that the region is very obscure and sources are very scarce. Grandmaster 06:24, 9 April 2007 (UTC)


 * If no one objects, I would like to add my proposed edits to the article. If there are objections, let's discuss them. Grandmaster 07:45, 13 April 2007 (UTC)


 * I agree that the region does not need to be split into multiple articles unless there is a lot of information about them, and for the same reason I think that information about the city of Paytakaran should be primarily contained in the history section of Beylagan (town). Could people familiar with this subject check this image for accuracy of the borders of this region and location of the town, as I think it is necessary to rough maps for the region and the location of the town available on the articles. John Vandenberg 09:31, 13 April 2007 (UTC)


 * We have another map here: Image:Historical Armenia & neighbouring states.jpg. The two maps provide identical information about the location of the province, but differ with regard to location of the city of Paytakaran. Grandmaster 09:45, 13 April 2007 (UTC)


 * There was no discussion for months on this article, since the other party to the dispute ignores the talk. The article cannot remain in its present condition forever, and people have a right to edit it. I'm readding my edits in the form agreed with the Transhumanist. Anyone objecting to any line or part should present his objections on talk, blind reverts will be reported to the admins. Grandmaster 08:03, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Not going to happen. You can't single handedly add your personal original research. That's strictly prohibited in Wikipedia.--  Ευπάτωρ   Talk!! 13:01, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
 * It is not original research, it is well referenced info you just removed again. Grandmaster 13:04, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
 * No matter how many times you say it, it's not going to make it so.--  Ευπάτωρ   Talk!! 14:39, 18 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Just check the article:


 * Prior to becoming Paytakaran, the region was known as Caspiane by Greco-Roman authors. Caspiane was contested between the regional powers. According to Strabo: "To the country of the Albanians belongs also the territory called Caspiane, which was named after the Caspian tribe, as was also the sea; but the tribe has now disappeared". Strabo also mentions Caspiane among the lands conquered by king Artaxias I from Medes.


 * It clearly says that the region was part of Albania and Medes. Yet you reverted the mention of that in the intro. I think that this is gonna be next arbcom case, involving me and you. Grandmaster 04:36, 19 April 2007 (UTC)

all of this writing will be processed to make sure that is is true and that no one has just edited it.

I'm back from wikibreak
Though it will take me a day or three before I can find the time to refamiliarize myself with the details. In the meantime, please refrain from threats, and from escalating any conflicts over the article. The article is improving, albeit slowly, and we are all dedicated to its further improvement. Let's do so as mature adults and resolve this here. Arbcom already has its hands full, and doesn't need any more cases. Let's do our part to minimize the burden placed on Arbcom.

Note that I moved the article believing that there would be no objections. Since there were objections, I have no problem with it being reverted back to the original title. Grandmaster, I ask that you take the same approach. If you disagree with a revert of an edit you've made, simply take that as an invitation to discuss the edit for consensus building.

I read fast, and so I don't mind poring through "screeds of debate". I'll be back up to speed soon.  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  


 * Thanks, this is what I did from the very beginning and do now. If you check the discussion just above this section, you'll see that I tried to find out what the problem was with my edit, why I was reverted without any edit summary, and did not receive a satisfactory response. This article was one of those that resulted in that arbcom case, so it would good to find a resolution to this dispute. I think that reconciliation of positions is not gonna work in this particular case, as one of the sides simply denies any evidence cited, no matter what it is. I'm actually considering further actions to have this dispute finally resolved. But anyway, thanks for rejoining us, I'm willing to cooperate as usual. Grandmaster 10:47, 22 April 2007 (UTC)

The region vs. the province
Paytakaran was at various times a province of Medes, Caucasian Albania and the Kingdom of Armenia.


 * I think the sticking points on the article have been mostly grammatical/semantic. Your "opponents" are sticklers for detail, and it seems to me that they merely wish to keep the article free from ambiguity and error.  The above sentence for instance may lead readers (who don't bother to read the whole article) to assume that the region was called Paytakaran while in the hands of each of the named kingdoms.  For example, referring to Constantinople (which is time-period-specific) as Istanbul could be rather confusing, and may lead readers to make erroneous assumptions, such as that Constantinople was a Turkish city, that it was always called Istanbul, etc.


 * Someone reading just the lead of this article may easily assume that the province was called Paytakaran throughout its history, and this would be an erroneous assumption. It is in this sense grammatically awkward.  Grandmaster, can you think of a way to fix the above sentence to accomodate these concerns?


 *  Th e Tr ans hu man ist  


 * The thing is that it was called Paytakaran while being part of Medes and Caucasian Albania. Shirakatzi has been misquoted, and I suspect that it was done on purpose, as anyone who actually read that source could not have noticed what it actually said. I’ve been asking for quote from the following source for quote a while now:


 * According to Anania Shirakatsi's Ashkharatsuyts ("World Atlas," 7th c. AD), Paytakaran was the 11th among the 15 provinces of the Kingdom of Armenia. It consisted of 14 cantons (gavars): Hrakot, Perozh, Vardanakert, Yotnporakyan Bagink, Krekyan, Vovtibagha, Kaghanost, Buros, Pitchanhani, Atshi, Bagavan, Spandaran-perozh, Vormizd-perozh, and Alevan. It was bounded by the Capsian Sea to the east, Araxes river to the north and north-west, Atropatene to the south, and the Armenian province of Vaspurakan to the west.


 * It has never been provided. So I had to find it myself. It is available online in Russian and it says:


 * 11. Пайтакаран, к востоку от Ути, на Араксе, имеет 12 областей, которыми владеет ныне Атрпатакан: 1. Хракот-Перож, 2. Варданакерт, 3. Еотнпоракиан-Багинк, 4. {50} Ротибага, 5. Баганрот, 6. Ароспижан, 7. Гани, 8. Атли, 9. Багаван, 10. Спандаран-Перож, 11. Ормизд-Перож, 12. Алеван. Производит несметное количество хлопка и самородный ячмень.


 * Paytakaran, to the east of Uti on Araxes, has 12 cantons, which are currently in possession of Atrpatakan. Then goes the list of its 12 cantons.


 * Atrpatakan is Armenian spelling of Atropatene, i.e. Medes. So it was part of Medes after Armenia ceased to exist as an independent state, and later became part of Albania again. I’m not really happy with the way certain users handle the sources. I never failed to provide quotes from the sources I referred to, and I expect the same from other editors. While we are supposed to always assume good faith, I don’t see it as a content dispute anymore, it seems to me like a deliberate attempt to suppress certain info. We've been discussing this for many months without any progress, while all the sources agree that the region was part of various states and not just one. Grandmaster 05:01, 24 April 2007 (UTC)
 * So Grandmaster, still think you're fighting a battle here? Here is your "opponent"'s response. Grandmaster, it is funny for you to talk about a deliberate attempts to suppress certain info. Where do you me to list all your suppressions and deliberate misinformations, it's a very long list...

Paytakaran is an Armenian word for the Armenian province. The etymology is 100% Armenian. And if what you just did above is not distorting information, tell me what is it then? “Anania Shirakatsi's Ashkharatsuyts”, just happens to be an Armenian work by an Armenian author right?

“Paytakaran, to the east of Uti on Araxes, has 12 cantons, which are currently in possession of Atrpatakan.”

It does not support your original research and faulty conclusion. It says that Paytakaran has 12 cantons, and those cantons were in possession currently of Atrpatakan. You never provided any single source which shows that Paytakaran was not a term used to refer to the Armenian province.

Abu Dulaf in 950 AD, claims P’aytakaran as the ancient Armenian Province. You can find it on page 73 of the 1955 edition. The famous Heraclius, Emperor of Byzantium of Walter Emil Kaegi on its index writes the term Armenia just after it. You know what suppression of information is in this case, it is to dilute every historic Armenian article because regions happen to be now part of Azerbaijan. Add Albanians, add Medes or what have you?--  Ευπάτωρ   Talk!! 14:23, 24 April 2007 (UTC)


 * This is exactly what I call distortion and suppression of info. Just check your statements:


 * It says that Paytakaran has 12 cantons, and those cantons were in possession currently of Atrpatakan. You never provided any single source which shows that Paytakaran was not a term used to refer to the Armenian province.


 * Hello, you just quoted it. The source says that Paytakaran was part of Atropatene. What else do you need? And why this info was deleted from the quote from Armenian Geography that either you or Tigran included in the article? As for Heraclius, here’s from the book about his military campaigns:


 * Shahrvaraz moved from Nisibis, through Media, to P'aytakaran in Albania.


 * The war in Armenia, 572-3


 * Geoffrey Greatrex, Samuel N. C. Lieu, Michael H. Dodgeon. The Roman Eastern Frontier and the Persian Wars (AD 226-363): a documentary history. ISBN 0415003423


 * As for Paytakaran being Armenian word, Armenian scholar Patkanov was not so sure.


 * Эта провинция находилась в южной части треугольника, образуемого слиянием Куры и Аракса, частью переходила за Аракс в Муган и простиралась до Каспийского моря. Входя весьма часто в состав Адербейджана, она носила у армян имя да сих пор этимологически необъясненное, а персам совершенно неизвестное. Окончание аран армянское. Оно встречается в конце еще одной области этой провинции, Спандаран. Большая часть этих областей носит названия, неизвестные другим писателям.


 * He failed to explain the meaning of the name. If it was indeed Armenian, it would not be so difficult to explain its meaning, would it? Also note how he says that this province was part of Aderbeijan (Atropatene) very often. Are you still going to deny that this region was part of other states? Grandmaster 04:47, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
 * The region was clearly part of other states. But the problem is the article isn't about the region per se, it is about the region when it was called "Paytakaran".  That's been the crux of this conflict since I've been watching.  You guys need to come up with a solution to this precise issue:  how to present the political entity that this region consisted of at different times.  Lumping them all together, loses the individual naming of each province.  One side wants to lump them, the other side wants to keep them distinct.  Please start cooperating and find a solution.  I would like to get out of here.  Thank you.   Th e Tr ans hu man ist     21:16, 6 May 2007 (UTC)


 * It is tiresome to be constantly accused by Grandmaster of distorting sources. Read carefully, the source does not say there was a Paytakaran in Albania, it says that Paytakaran was lost and that the cantons were now in the possession of Atrpatakan. The book by Geoffrey Greatex say it was in Armenia, the term Paytakaran is used in the context of the city, not province: “from Dvin to the P'aytakaran city, and that he should assign the city to the census” You were told numerous times about the misuse of Paytakaran to refer to the city. I am not interested to discuss this with you any further. Your denial that Paytakaran was an Armenian word, even when sources explicitly say it is, is all that I need to know that I should stop arguing. Even your source Patkanov says that the suffix -aran is Armenian, which for some odd reason you forgot to translate. Open any Russian/English - Armenian dictionary and look up the word "payt". Paytakaran=land of wood. пайт=дерево. Here are two scholars who agree: "Е. А. Пахомов, исходя из лексики армянского языка, считал, что "Пайт" - дерево, "кан" - местность (409, с. 17). К. В. Тревер, повторяя это, этимологизировала Пайтакаран как "Деревянный (город)" (451, с. 265). "Пайт" - в древнеармянском - дерево, буквально - "Пайтакаран" означает "место лесов, изобилие лесов"." --  Ευπάτωρ   Talk!! 14:51, 25 April 2007 (UTC)
 * You reverted the accurate quote from Shirakatzi, which said that the province of Paytakaran was part of Atropatene. How long are you gonna deny the fact that the region was part of various states, and not just one? And how long are you going to delete the sources that contradict your POV? You say that the region was lost, does it not mean that it became a part of another state? What is the point of your denial? I wonder if I can submit this case to arbcom now or if there are some other formal steps I need to take first. I would appreciate if anyone advised. Grandmaster 04:34, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Some socks are again reverting the text without discussion. I personally liked the original version of the article, given the fact that it had more information in it.  However, this also has to be understood that, we cannot have only one version of the story - both versions has to be kept.  I guess the version now reflects that opinion. --Ulvi I. 12:11, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
 * For the billionth time! This article is not about a region or a city, it's about the province by the name of Paytakaran. NOTHING ELSE. Stop accusing me, is asking you to stop accusing me too hard for you to understand? You requested this mediation, if you had no intention to discuss, if you had the intention to continuously accuse others and push them out, then why did you file for mediation? And Ulvi, Hakob is not a sock, he is a long time member who happens to know a lot about Paytakaran. Why should Hakob not revert without discussion, while you can? It was agreed by Grandmaster that if no consensus was obtained the article remains as it was, then little bit of changes were made to satisfy him, which I accepted. No consensus was obtained but he moved to edit the article to suit his pov. Grandmaster breached the conditions attained by the mediator; he made those changes without reaching consensus, and pushed me out by false accusations and still continues to do.

The region was lost like Constantinople was lost. It does not mean that Paytakaran became a province when it was lost, neither does it mean that Caspiane is Paytakaran when sources were provided against it. But I gave my OK for the history of the region to cover Caspiane, I made a compromise.

Grandmaster added back Paytakaran on the lead now as a city to have the Azerbaijani term, he did not achieve consensus, it was Grandmasters move, by doing this he left mediation. I accepted the arbitrations decision, but Grandmaster has not changed. He was shown that there was various different Beylaqan's, but this whole problem with him is that there was no Azerbaijani term so inserting back an Azerbaijan term in the intro. I don't understand why the accuracy of this article should suffer for political reasons? Should this article pay with its accuracy because the region is now part of Aerbaijan and that some believe that since over a thousand years ago it was an Armenian province that readers will question the legitimacy of the republic of Azerbaijan?

So Ulvi, I am answering this to you, because you claimed that Hakob reverted without discussion. Ulvi, where does Shirakatzi say that the province became part of Atropatene? He writes the cantons were lost, Grandmaster assumes that Atropatene had a province called Paytakaran, this source doesn't even say it became a province after it was lost. Grandmaster added in the section "Province of Greater Armenia" that the cantons were currently in the possession of Atropatene while that section was about the province in Greater Armenia and this following the heated discussions, indicates to me that there is no way I could reason with Grandmaster. I created this page, which was about the Armenian Province of Paytakaran, and accepted the concessions and accepted the mediation, and its conditions, I made concessions to incorporate in the article other elements, but now Grandmaster is even pushing it in the section on the province of Greater Armenia. He has shown time and again that he is not ready to make any compromises, even after the arbitration.

'''To The Transhumanist, following a breach to the conditions fixed before the mediation by Grandmaster, I leave the discussion, Grandmaster could edit this page to fit whatever taste he has. I contribute to create articles and expand them and not to waste my time arguing with people who have no intention to make any compromises. I'm done.--  Ευπάτωρ  ''' Talk!! 15:54, 26 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Hakob is obviously a meatpuppet. He turned up when Eupator ran out of rvs to edit war for him. So far Hakob has not contributed a single line to the talk of this article, which speaks for itself. As for Eupator’s claims, I only added accurate and referenced info to the article. I still have not received an explanation from Eupator why he removes the accurate quote from Shirakatzi. Eupator seems to agree that Shirakatzi says that Paytakaran was part of Atropatene according to that source (there’s no way of denying it anyway, the source is available online), but keeps removing the accurate quote from the source. Clearly, this person simply does not want to accept the facts. Whether it was the province of Atropatene under that or different name is irrelevant, we need to mention the fact that the territory was part of that state and accurately quote the source. It was proven that Caspiane was the previous name of the province, and even the version of the article to which Eupator reverts to says so. Moreover, the original version of the article, created by Eupator and Tigran, also said so. And we know (check Strabo) that Caspiane was part of Albania. I don't see why we cannot include the same info into the intro. Now Eupator changed his position and denies what he himself was saying a while ago. This cannot go on forever, with or without Eupator the accurate info should be included in the article. Grandmaster 05:06, 27 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Also, Eupator says: I contribute to create articles and expand them and not to waste my time arguing with people who have no intention to make any compromises. Please Eupator tell me what compromise you have made so far? Just one example? All you did was just denied the sources, no matter how authoritative they were. Grandmaster 05:12, 27 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Another quote from an Armenian source:


 * A belt of Armenian peripheral lands fell away to its neighbors: Gugark in the north to Iberia, Utik and Arcax (Artsakh) in the northeast to Caucasian Albania, Paytakaran and Parskahayk in the east to Atrpatakan (modern Azerbaijan), and Korcek and Aljnik in the south to Mesopotamia, thus leaving a considerably reduced territory.


 * P 92 Nina Garsoyan. The Arshakuni Dynasty (A.D. 12-[180?]-428)


 * The Armenian People From Ancient To Modern Times: The Dynastic Periods: From Antiquity to the Fourteenth Century. ISBN: 0312101694


 * I don’t know how many more sources Eupator needs to accept the facts. Grandmaster 05:28, 27 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Uh, I am not a meatpuppet. Stop the groundless accusations please. Then again, you're always ready to make an [often unfounded] accusation (especially when the person's edits are in opposition to yours). Just like I told Adil, I don't like to engage in "talks" with uncompromising editors because nothing productive gets done. I came to expand this article because Eupator had proposed I do so. I was going to propose my changes on the talk page first, but then I saw your controversial changes and reverted. If you would like to accuse me of anything, please see WP:AGF and accuse Parishan and Ulvi as well. They have done the exact same thing.


 * Why are you putting words in Eupator's mouth? If I was able to understand him then so should you. Read more carefully next time. If you build a castle out of a deck of playing cards and you consider it to be yours and one day I come and take the cards away from you, that doesn't mean that the castle is in my possession. Eupator agreed (like I did), that Paytakaran was lost, which is what Shirakatsi has written. But what Shirakatsi does not say is that Paytakaran was a province of Atropatene or that they had a Paytakaran (they didn't). Do you have any sources that call the region Paytakaran without qualifying it as a land being lost by Armenia or without referring to Armenia?


 * Caspiane and Paytakaran are two different entities and cover two different periods (centuries apart). Just like Yerevan is not Erebuni, the Erivan Khanate is not Armenia, Babylonia is not Iraq, Ancient Egypt is not modern day Egypt and the Democratic Republic of Armenia of 1918 is not the Republic of Armenia of today.This discussion is about nothing really. Eupator simply created an article about Paytakaran, which was the name given to an Armenian province. What is your problem with this? I don't follow you. Historians aren’t even sure of where the provincial city was. There was not only one Beylagan, and when this word was first used, there was no Paytakaran left.


 * I understand what bothers Eupator. Unlike yourself, he has made concessions. He did not make changes while you both were sorting things out with a mediator, but you did. Indeed, he has made concessions for the entire article, and you come in and edit the single section that covers the province of Greater Armenia, when the article was created for the purpose of covering that. You even edit the section to relate to its loss; do you really need to add this every single time the word Armenia or Armenian is used?


 * Furthermore, the sources do not support your claims. Garsoyan says that Paytakaran was lost but does not claim that the Albanians had a Paytakaran. Paytakaran vanished from the map after it was lost. Albanians had no Paytakaran, they took the land.


 * It is very difficult to discuss things with you. Given the situation, I think I'll have to fill out a RfC on your behavior. No one likes to be accused of meatpuppeting or denying/distorting sources.


 * Happy editing, Hakob 00:50, 28 April 2007 (UTC)


 * No need to blackmail me. If you want to start an RfC on me, go ahead and do it. Unlike yourself, me, Parishan and Ulvi are people who were involved in editing this article from the very beginning, and did not turn up just to rv in support of a certain person. There’s enough ground to call for admin attention to your actions, which I will not fail to do. As for Eupator, quite possible that this article will end up in arbcom. I’m trying to prevent it, but the way it is I don’t see any other solution to the problem. It has been effectively demonstrated with reference to endless number of sources that Paytakaran was the same land as Caspiane. It belonged to Medes, Armenia and Albania during the course of its history. I don’t see where Shirakatzi says that Paytakaran was part of Atropatene under a different name. And I did see any concessions on part of Eupator whatsoever, he made none. Correct me if I’m wrong. Also what’s wrong with inclusion of an accurate quote from Shirakatzi and why is it being reverted? You restored a baseless claim that Strabo speaks about 2 Caspianes, please show me exactly where he does that. Would you mind to show me any map with 2 Caspianes? There are so many examples of such POV editing, I can go on giving examples. If you really want to resolve this dispute and include accurate info in the article, let’s do it. Otherwise we will have to follow formal procedures to have the dispute settled. Grandmaster 06:53, 28 April 2007 (UTC)


 * You reverted in support of a certain position. I don't understand your argument at all. Paytakaran never belonged to the Medes or Caucasian Albania, Paytakaran was an Armenian province and was lost to the Medes and Albania. Did you read what I wrote before? I have already addressed your points. Eupator created an article about Paytakaran, referring to an Armenian province. I do not have to provide any evidence that it was under a different name in Atropatene, but I would appreciate it if you would provide some calling it Paytakaran, you are the one claiming. So if Shirakatsi does not say it was called under a different name it does not mean that it was called Paytakaran. The administrative borders were not kept and the province ceased to exist after it was lost, so your claim that Albanians had a Paytakaran makes no sense.


 * You don't see any concessions coming from Eupator? I'm going to be repeating myself, but this article was about the province of Paytakaran, an Armenian province. Eupator agreed to include other elements, and in the article the province of Greater Armenia had a section (it was a great concession to reduce to a section what the article was actually supposed to be about). This did not satisfy you, so in the lead you added Medes and Caucasian Albania. You even add the city and an Azerbaijani name. Is this edit encyclopaedic? And then you ask what is wrong with with your edit...? You seem to want it to have had Albania and Medes somewhere in its history, but all the sources I have seen about the province refer to it as an Armenian province. Wikipedia does not allow original research.


 * I think you have a misunderstanding of what Wikipedia is. We are not here to demonstrate anything. We are here to write an encyclopaedia, which is a knowledge base of what has already been published. Falsely interpreting sources and recquiring those interpretations to be included in articles is called original research and is not allowed. You speak of formal procedure but you edited the article while both of you were under mediation. You change the rules when something does not satisfy you (you can't refer to the rules only when they work in your favor).


 * I think I will follow Eupator then, I did not see a change in the way you are treating me. I do not have the patience to debate with someone who will make groundless accusations against me (Wow, he edited an article, he must be a meatpuppet!). As Eupator already said, you can edit the article to suit your taste. Thinking that you own articles will only drive people against you. Take this as a friendly advice.


 * Happy editing, Hakob 00:12, 29 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Hakob, you did not edit the article, you edit warred on it. Your only edit was reverting it 3 times to Eupator’s preferred version. I don’t think you staying away from this article will somehow affect its quality, because you have not contributed anything to it so far. If you want to actually edit it, you are always welcome. Now back to the topic. The sources make it clear that the region was originally called Caspiane. Caspiane was conquered by Artaxiad from Medes, and then lost to Albania. At certain point in the history it became part of Armenia again, and then was lost to Medes and Albania. The only source that refers to the region after its capital city is actually Shirakatzi. From what I see, even other Armenian sources call it Caspiane. For instance, Faustus of Byzantium calls it land of Caspies and land of parcies, and that was close to the times Armenia lost the region forever. Later the center of Caucasian Albania was located in Paytakaran, in the city of the same name, under the local leader Sanatruk. Also, I don’t see how mentioning the capital city of the province is not encyclopedic. How can you write an article about a province and say nothing about its capital? I have not seen any article like that. Grandmaster 10:48, 30 April 2007 (UTC)

Eupator, there is still major disputes on this page. I am not happy with the current edition either, but just coming and removing Paytakaran's historical location within Azerbaijan, its links to Atropatena and Albania is not going to work. Thank you for creating this article, but it does not mean that we cannot comment on it or suggest improvements. For your information, not all sources on Armenia mention Paytakaran being part of it, at any given period of the history. It is good that now Hakob talks. I am also for separation of Caspiane and Paytakaran, actually I was the first one suggesting to separate these two issues. More ancient and larger Caspiane included Paytarakaran (region) when the latter did not exists as such. --Ulvi I. 19:34, 28 April 2007 (UTC)


 * The thing is that it is the same region that later changed its name. At least that’s what Robert Hewsen says, and he is one of the best experts on that period of history of the region:


 * BAGAWAN (Baguan or Ateshi Bagawan), a district of the land of Kaspiane (Arm. Kaspk, later Paytakaran) lying along the right bank of the Araxes river and corresponding to the northeastern part of Iranian Azerbaijan.


 * With consideration to this, what is the point in creation of two articles on the same region, considering that information is very scarce? I think the best would be to provide detailed info about history of the region and all known transfers from one state to another. It will be more encyclopedic and easy for the reader to follow. From what I see, someone just tries to remove from the article any connection of the region with other states, and it is no good. Verifiable info should remain in the article. Grandmaster 20:16, 28 April 2007 (UTC)

Was Paytakaran a province of Medes?
And if the region was a province of Medes, was it called "Paytakaran" when it was a province of Medes? If not, then it is false to say "Paytakaran was a province of Medes". The article needs to be made semantically clear and grammatically correct. Will you guys please fix it so that readers don't jump to the wrong conclusions? Thank you.  Th e Tr ans hu man ist   21:26, 6 May 2007 (UTC)


 * It was the province of Medes, as is clear from the sources. Shirakatzi says: Paytakaran, to the east of Uti on Araxes, has 12 cantons, which are currently in possession of Atrpatakan. The comments of the editor said that the region “very often” was part of Atropatene (Входя весьма часто в состав Адербейджана...). So it was part of Medes, and its population consisted of Iranian-speaking people. Grandmaster 05:21, 7 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Those sources are not clear enough because a region can be within borders, without it being a province. It's only your assumption. From what I read from Shirakatzi, there is no indication that there was a province named "Paytakaran" within Atrpatakan...the only thing that is clear from Shirakatzi is that the region became part of Atrpatakan. There is no reason to assume from that source that the provincial borders were maintained. Also, it's not a bizarre occurence that Shirakatzi uses the term Paytakaran...he's an Armenians and he is using an Armenian term from which it can be assumed that the existance of any such province outside of the Armenian frontiers is just that, an assumption.


 * I am not expecting a long answer as I don't really want to debate about this after seeing how Hakob and Eupator were "kicked out". Grandmaster, You have affirmed ownership of this article and unless there is a behaviour change, I don't think you'll find anyone wanting to debate with you. Everyone does not possess patience like Fadix had. - Fedayee 22:15, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
 * It is also interesting that the name of Paytakaran as a province occurs only in Shirakatzi. Faustus of Byzantium (5th century), for example, calls the region Kaspiane. And also, do we have any sources to support the claim that the region's provincial borders changed when it was part of Atropatene? Grandmaster 11:14, 9 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Only Shirakatzi? Grandmaster you are contradicting yourself. Yes, the region was called Kaspiane... but Kaspiane is bigger than the Armenian province of Paytakaran. I can also see above that user:Ulvi I. has written the same thing. Your last phrase is also against wiki-policy of WP:Verifiability. You added that it was a province of Albania, you have added the stuff about Medes, yet the material you have quoted here does not support the assertion that Paytakaran was anything other than an Armenian province. The region might have been apart of Albania, taken by the Medes, and now apart of the modern-day Azerbaijan, but there is no evidence that the province of Paytakaran continued existing after the Armenians lost it. As per policy you should provide sources to support that since you added it. - Fedayee 16:26, 9 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Ok, but which other primary source refers to the province as Paytakaran? I could not find any. And remember, we have Hewsen who says that Kaspiane was later called Paytakaran, i.e. it is the same province. In fact, Hewsen shows the province on his map under the name of Kaspiane. I think we should move this article to Kaspiane, because that was the generally accepted name. Grandmaster 05:02, 10 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Check this:


 * It is clear that the Balakanachik who in 840/1 are defeated by Esay Abu Muse are the same people who revolted in 830/1, and the present passage is a confirmation of the (approximate) period of 12 years given in 111.19 as the duration of the Goroz rebellion. As to the identity of these Balakanachik', Professor Minorsky has pointed to Baylaqan, and notwithstanding the unexpected Arabic form of the name of the province the Armenians knew as P'aytakaran, this is historically feasible. The province of P'aytakaran would, like Siwnik', have revolted against Babek who, despite his alliances with local personalities like Step'annos Ablasad and Esay Abu Muse, was unable at this period of his career to control the large territory he sought to wrest from Arab authority.


 * C. J. F. Dowsett. A Neglected Passage in the "History of the Caucasian Albanians". Bulletin of the School of Oriental and African Studies, University of London, Vol. 19, No. 3. (1957), pp. 456-468.


 * So it is clear from this that the province of Paytakaran existed in 840, during the Babek revolt, and it was not part of Armenia, which lost it in 387, but part of Albania. The Arabic/Persian form of the name of the province was Baylaqan, so it should be added to the lead. Grandmaster 05:29, 10 May 2007 (UTC)


 * This assures me that the only way to deal with this is to file an RfC on you which I would support if brought forward by user:Hakob as he has considered. Requesting primary sources is your set of rules and expecting me to have access to material dating over a thousand years is kinda senseless. Wikipedia prefers secondary sources...your request is a form of disruption. I don't see anything from Dowsett's text which supports your affirmations. "Historically feasible" and "would" are nothing other than speculations which do not justify your version. Dowsett does not deny that it is a speculation. Also, you should not forget that I can search the archives and when typing "Minorsky", I've found that what he claims does not support your assertions. One find from the archives I found particularly interesting is Dowsett's doubts on "Bayleqan". Don't waste your time copy-pasting, no more checking for me. I requested explicit sources and I have obtained none. - Fedayee 20:29, 10 May 2007 (UTC)


 * I don’t understand why you keep talking about this RfC. It is nothing but harassment. If you want to do it, go ahead and do it, I don’t care, but stop threatening me. RfC on other users is not the way to resolve content disputes, and you persistent denial of facts is pretty obvious. Dowsett says: The province of P'aytakaran would, like Siwnik', have revolted against Babek. I remind you that in 387 Armenia ceased existing as a state and was divided between Rome and Persia. Artsakh, Utik and Paytakaran were lost to Albania. The fact that the province existed in the 9th century is the answer to your question. As for the rest, if I spend time checking primary and secondary sources, I see no reason why you should not do the same. That’s what the rules require, and I provided many links and titles. All you need to do is to check them. Grandmaster 04:59, 11 May 2007 (UTC)
 * As for Paytakaran being Beylegan, while Minorsky doubted it, Dowsett thinks that it is "historically feasible". And I quoted a couple of articles from Iranica saying that Paytakaran = Beylegan. You cannot discard all those sources just because one scholar thinks otherwise. We should differentiate between minority and majority views. Grandmaster 05:03, 11 May 2007 (UTC)