Talk:Pearl-Continental Hotels & Resorts

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 14 August 2020 and 4 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ivanaliztorresm. Peer reviewers: David Torres Montalvo, Adriana.rodriguez2002.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 10:38, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Lead section
The purpose of the lead section is to introduce and summarize the whole article, not contain half the details of the article. I would recommend keeping excellent first sentence but the remainder of the details in the lead should be moved into the body of the article. At the moment, the lead section has lots of extra information that is not explained or included in the body of the article. The lead should not go into details about the owners, Hashoo Group, or other hotel brands, such as "PC Legacy" without this being explained in a body section of the article. Since the article is divided into sections there needs to be a clear distinction between the lead section, which appears above the table of contents, and the body of the article, which appears below the first heading. - Cameron Dewe (talk) 02:38, 29 March 2024 (UTC)