Talk:Pennsylvania Railroad 4800/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk)  22:16, 15 April 2011 (UTC)

Interesting article, nice reading about electric trains in the US. As mentioned, I would like to see prose on the technical aspects, otherwise mostly minor issues. Arsenikk (talk)  22:16, 15 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Comments:
 * Don't presume people know Pennsylvania is the US (at least not when the topic is electric locomotives)
 * Added, why I keep forgetting that is a mystery. ​​​​​​ ​​ Niagara ​​Don't give up the ship 18:09, 16 April 2011 (UTC)
 * First instance of PRR mentions "Pennsylvania" and not the railway by full name, which is rather confusing.
 * Fixed. ​​​​​​ ​​ Niagara ​​Don't give up the ship 18:09, 16 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I would like to have seen key technical information in the lead, such as power output and tractive effort. Also year of construction wold be nice in the lead.
 * Added year. Unsure of the best way to include the power output. ​​​​​​ ​​ Niagara ​​Don't give up the ship 18:09, 16 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Similarly, the technical information about the locomotive should be in a separate section of prose, and not just in the infobox. Among other things, as the infobox is now, it is unreferenced.
 * Included mention of power output, driver size, height and length, and added refs to the infobox. ​​​​​​ ​​ Niagara ​​Don't give up the ship 18:09, 16 April 2011 (UTC)
 * First sentence of the operation section contains the date twice.
 * Fixed. ​​​​​​ ​​ Niagara ​​Don't give up the ship 18:09, 16 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Congratulations with a good article. Sorry for the late replay. Arsenikk (talk)  19:40, 23 April 2011 (UTC)