Talk:Pennsylvania Route 343/GA1

GA Review
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 * RD: "The highway also passed the Mount Lebanon Cemetery, but there was no direct access to it. At the intersection with Cherry Street, State Route 343 entered the community of Reindeldville, located northeast of downtown Lebanon." - wrong tense. "The stay in..." too much personification. I would add more wikilinks - you can link to things once in the article, outside of the lead. "fireman's park"? Link to concurrent. Last sentence - highway continues as a locally-maintained highway? For the casual reader, its hard to tell the difference. History: "There was no concurrency, and instead, There, the highway turned to the northeast and into Lickdale, where it terminated at an intersection with State Route 443.[2]" ? Last sentence - was now = is now? Major intersections - are there no mileposts for the concurrency?
 * 1) Sourcing good.
 * 2) Neutral, broad, stable. Image of the road would be nice.

On hold Just a few minor things to fix. --Rschen7754 (T C) 21:53, 30 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Done. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 01:13, 31 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Passing. FAC may complain about the links. --Rschen7754 (T C) 02:25, 31 December 2008 (UTC)