Talk:Pennsylvania Route 546/GA1

GA Review
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Comments: I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 17:51, 1 July 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) The north end parameter in the infobox needs to be properly formatted to say "Cattaraugus CR 45 at New York state line in Otto Township"
 * 2) Request a shield for Cattaraugus CR 45.
 * 3) Redundant to indicate Duke Center is in Pennsylvania.
 * 4) Fix spelling of "Cattarugaus County"
 * 5) Can more historical information be added to the lead?
 * 6) Duke Center is not a borough.
 * 7) The sentence "Duke Center is moderately developed, with PA 546 heading along the center of the community." sounds awkward.
 * 8) In the sentence "The community and PA 546 follow along the base of the 2,000 feet (610 m) mountain.", change "follow" to "run".
 * 9) Knapp Creek links to an unrelated creek in West Virginia.
 * 10) "local community"? Sounds awkward, I would suggest removing the word "local".
 * 11) "of which the road is named for": remove "of".
 * 12) "A short distance and through several taller mountains, reaching as high as 2,200 feet (670 m) tall." is a sentence fragment.
 * 13) Fix spelling of "Cattaraugarus County".
 * 14) "but the highway was not complete in terms of construction" sounds wordy, rephrase to "but the highway was not completely constructed."
 * 15) Comma not needed in sentence "The lone bridge constructed along PA 546, was a concrete slab bridge over Knapp Creek."
 * 16) "Annual Average Daily Traffic" should be in all lowercase letters.
 * 17) Per the WP:ELG, the county and location columns are not to be used for roads entirely within one county and location.
 * 18) Are the names for the routes in the major intersections table known?
 * 19) Can you add a picture of the route to the article?
 * Done. (And for the 2nd one - request made) - Mitch/HC32 20:31, 1 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 01:22, 3 July 2009 (UTC)