Talk:Pennsylvania Route 664/GA1

GA Review
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Comments: I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 16:58, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) The sentences "The southern terminus is at State Route 120 in Lock Haven. The northern terminus is at State Route 44 on the Clinton-Lycoming county line in the community of Haneyville." should be combined.
 * 2) Can the lead be expanded with more information from the route description and history?
 * 3) Change "crossing in the northern limits of Lock Haven" to "leaving Lock Haven".
 * 4) "While winding a few curves" sounds awkward.
 * 5) The sentence "The route's surroundings are well-developed in Dunnstown, with homes following the highway." sounds awkward also.
 * 6) The route description has only two wikilinks. Can more links be added to routes and municipalities?
 * 7) "starts winding in different directions"? What directions?
 * 8) In phrase "rather large hairpin turn", "rather large" is unnessecary.
 * 9) Change "begins its stretch towards Haneyville" to "heads towards Haneyville".
 * 10) The sentence "The next stretch of State Route 664 is full of curves in different directions, turning at a constant rate." sounds awkward.
 * 11) "continuing northward on its way to Haneyville": it is redundant to mention road is heading toward Haneyville again.
 * 12) What is this "small community" along the road called?
 * 13) The sentence "Eventually, the large patch of forests come to a clearing, where Old Dirt Road intersects." sounds awkward.
 * 14) Change "gains the moniker of the" to "becomes".
 * 15) Again indicate what "small community" the highway passes through.
 * 16) "ends uneventfully"? Remove "uneventfully.
 * 17) The route description is mostly sourced from Yahoo Maps. Can any other sources be added?
 * 18) In the sentence "The first segment, which occurred in 1935, was from Little Plum Run Road and northward", indicate that this was the first segment to be paved.
 * 19) Indicate what "the town line" is.
 * 20) The history of the route seems to just describe when individual segments of the route were paved. Can any other historical information be added?
 * 21) In the major intersections table, are the road names known?
 * 22) Can any pictures of the route be added to the article?


 * Changes made for every single one but #s 17, 20, and 22. You know how hard it is to get PA references in the first place, so its not easy to put more sources in.Mitch/HC32 20:15, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 16:47, 30 June 2009 (UTC)