Talk:Pentecostal Mission/Temp

OK
Will this do? As I have done it from scratch with all my efforts and no COPY done.Rencin Matthew. rencin24

Good one
This is excellent. Thanks for your efforts. Let's make it clean and also make sure no body puts in bad stuff as we witnessed in our previous article.

God bless you brother/sister for that. I would love to see more and more efforts to get this information into wikipedia as I believe it will help a lot to others.rencin24 10:07, 21 September 2006 (UTC)

To do
I've started with some minor copyedits. There is still a lot of work to do. Please always remember not write using "we" etc. --Pjacobi 14:45, 21 September 2006 (UTC)

major re-org and edits for neutrality
Hello everyone,

I have made some major changes to the structure of the article to give it a sense of flow and organization. Also remeber, this is not our church website. So we cannot use words such as "we" as pointed out by pjacobi. I wish to reiterate "the neutral point of view" idea of wikipedia. This is a basic informational page about the mission from a neutral point of view. Any comments, suggestions & idea are welcome. Thank you Rencin for putting together the article. pjacobi, I wonder if we can replace the copyright violation page with this article. Thanks.

SPM.