Talk:Pepsi Invaders/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Namcokid47 (talk · contribs) 18:47, 26 August 2019 (UTC)

You took a look at some of my older nominations, so I thought I'd try doing the same as to help clear out some of these. Namcokid47 (talk) 18:47, 26 August 2019 (UTC)

Okay, a couple of things: Namcokid47 (talk) 20:03, 26 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Because both of these sections are so short, I suggest merging the Gameplay and Development sections into one.
 * Done for this and the impact section.
 * Per this discussion, screenshots are not allowed in the infobox, so I would move it to the Gameplay section. The game doesn't have an official box from what I can see, so I would say using an iamge of the cartridge is okay.
 * I don't find that the discussion is really relevant here. The arguments made don't really apply, as the cartridge is not likely to be the most well-known aspect of the game. This is certainly an exception to the rule.
 * Impact and rarity can be merged together too. I also think the line "Most of the cartridges were discarded due to disinterest by their recipients" could be moved into the development paragraph.
 * Mm, I dunno about that; I feel that it being in this section helps to elaborate upon its rarity. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 16:04, 27 August 2019 (UTC)
 * That said, I'm going to try and address length issues and seek out more sources if possible before I'd like to see this passed (if it does). - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 16:05, 27 August 2019 (UTC)

It's looking a lot better now. Few more things: Namcokid47 (talk) 19:13, 27 August 2019 (UTC)
 * The Apprentice link needs to be fixed, leads to a DAB page at the moment.
 * Pipe link for Coca-Cola Company should be removed so it matches with the lead.
 * "Most of the cartridges were discarded due to disinterest by their recipients" should probably be moved into the History section.
 * Issues addressed. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 02:31, 29 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Okay, I think it looks good. Passed. Namcokid47 (talk) 18:10, 30 August 2019 (UTC)