Talk:Per Manum/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Albacore (talk · contribs) 03:26, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

Review:
 * First, Per Manum (The X-Files) should redirect to this page
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  17:44, 1 April 2012 (UTC)


 * It was written by Frank Spotnitz and series creator Chris Carter, and directed by Kim Manners. The episode helps to explore the series' overarching mythology. Combine the two sentences; something like: "Written by Frank Spotnitz and series creator Chris Carter, and directed by Kim Manners, the episode helps to explore the series' overarching mythology."
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  17:44, 1 April 2012 (UTC)


 * Delink the names of the actors in the lead since they're linked in the "plot" section.
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  17:44, 1 April 2012 (UTC)


 * FBI special agents John Doggett (Robert Patrick) and Dana Scully (Gillian Anderson) meet Duffy Haskell why not mention who plays Haskell?
 * Done.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
 * overhearing a pregnant woman, Mrs Hendershot why not mention who plays Hendershot since she seems important to the plot?
 * Done.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
 * believing that Rohrer is a CIA agent. you link FBI so why not CIA?
 * Done.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Delink Scully from the infobox
 * Done.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Duffy Haskel in this episode, would return would return->> returned
 * Done.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
 * They are driven away, but Hendershot enters labour. Unclear who "they" are hear: the marines or the group
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  15:40, 2 April 2012 (UTC)


 * Perhaps link "In vitro fertilisation", and do italicize "in vitro"
 * Done.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:58, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
 * In the Broadcast and reception section you have three "the episode"s in a row to begin sentences in the first paragraph; a reword would be nice.
 * Done, see below--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:53, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref 12, the date should be formatted as the other dates are
 * Done, these two were my fault...--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:53, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Are there any more reviews you could add or find?
 * I added a (pretty scathing) review from Cinefantastique.--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:02, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
 * If you could respond to each comment individually that would be great. I'll re-look the article when these are addressed. Albacore (talk) 03:26, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Reread and passed. Albacore (talk) 22:05, 2 April 2012 (UTC)