Talk:Percik Pesona

Grammar
In the reception section, these sentences seem broken


 * they also under pressure to succeed. retrospectively suggested that he should have known that the album would do poorly when he felt no passion for it.

The first portion needs a verb; the second needs a capital letter. Who suggested the lack of passion? Chris857 (talk) 03:24, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Thanks. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:25, 10 January 2012 (UTC)