Talk:Percy Shaw Jeffrey

B-Class review
After a request on my talk page, I'm going to leave a few comments on what would, in my opinion, make the article B-Class:


 * 1) Categories need to be better... right now, there's only the birth year and death year categories. There really should be others organizing be occupation, nationality, etc. See Category:People and its subcategories. ✅
 * 2) WP:Persondata should probably be added. ✅
 * 3) The lead is a bit short compared to the rest of the article. ✅, I think
 * 4) A number of The Colcestrian references could use some clarifications, such as month and year of publication, author (if applicable), etc. The PDF reference could use an accessdate.✅

Once that's all fixed, I think that this definitely deserves to be B-Class. Hope the GA review goes well! -Drilnoth (talk) 21:24, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Good work there! A few of the The Colchestrian references could use some more clarification, but otherwise it looks good. -Drilnoth (talk) 14:33, 21 January 2009 (UTC)